When I'm Gone
by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com
Writers often belong to families who forget or avoid reading the author’s work. I often wonder if there’s fear of discovery keeping them readerless.
Thursday, January 31, 2013
When I’m Gone
by Odin Roark
Will you get to know me
When I’m gone
After endings evolve into
New beginnings
When questions cease to arise?
What is it about another’s presence
That so often dissuades inquiry?
What is it about knowing someone
Up to a point that signifies
Satisfies
Nullifies
And indemnifies against loss?
Is knowing someone
Dependent on personal experience
Or can a well-defined shadow
Unseable in the sometime harshness of light
Remain spirited beyond yesterday?
Perhaps
You’ll scour the dim attic sanctum
Discover dusty boxes
Sealed up retrospect
Where passion’s shadowlight still ablaze
Has remained unread for so long
I hope you’ll get to know me
When I’m gone
For absence is but a convenience
Available to those seeking forgetfulness
budd
duke
Your feelings were nicely framed in an very expressive poetic song.
We don't really know how people will really react when we are gone...
WELL DONE!
God bless,
John Michael Domino
Has remained unread for so long"
I fear my 'relatives' responses to my poetry, and so don't promote It; my soul is one of so many..
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
those last two lines are simply perfect.
Yes!
john