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Slipstream

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

How often we become aware (or coerced) and buy into the “free ride,” that when all is said and done, there is a price. Did Hunter know that? Did David Foster Wallace know that? Do we know that? There is much to be said about the "indirect" journey to give credence to an outcome of struggle my grand daddy said in so many words, he being Cherokee. Respect the "oblique as answers in hiding," he said...even working it into a chant he later on revealed to me.

Tuesday, February 5, 2013

Slipstream

Movement frozen
Knows of dangers to project
Three lanes
Seven lanes
Life choices
Always beckoning
Follow the urge
Isn't that what it's all about

First time

A grade school playground
Force takes power
To stay on side lines
Failure
Steer to the "follow" lane
Surge to the power's fast lane
Grab the pull
The bully in front
Breaking resistance
Its girth of momentum unstoppable
Free rides
Free rides
No risk
Cocooned safety

School yards
I-Hop revisits
GPA encroachment
Graduation
Freedom
Pedal to the metal

"The World is a Vampire"
you know not
not yet
the interview
the job
the pull
the fast lane in view
the entrance ramp available

Quintessential speed

Follow the leader
Rise to the top
Meet the power
Meet the future spouse
Ah
The speed
The pull
The free ride


The details
The history
The babies
The promotions
The divorces
The...
The...


The return
The dirt roads
The two wheeled bike
The ruts
The flats
The...
The...

Nowhere the slipstream

Nirvana
 


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Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 7, 2013
"Respect the oblique, as answers in hiding." Your grand daddy was a very wise man.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 6, 2013
I didn't know of David Foster Wallace so I had to look him up. I assume the other is Hunter Thompson, who also committed suicide. By inference I believe you are writing about taking the easy way out with suicide.

Your poem seems to encompass a lifetime. A lifetime that should be carried out to the fullest and not cut short by a, “free ride.”

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 6, 2013
options and choices mmmm
budd

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on February 6, 2013
Thanks for the reminder - life is never an 'either-or' proposition -


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