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Hunger's Needle

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

It requires wisdom to understand wisdom: the music is nothing if the audience is deaf - Walter Lippmann

Tuesday, February 12, 2013

Hunger's Needle

Acumen's voice smolders quietly
when deafened ears respond only
to discords of witlessness

Wisdom's heat invites comfort
its embers remain alive
its wake of constant resolve
lifts vigils of swirling persuasion
choking away illiteracy
ignoring cross or sickle waved ominously

Ever present

Creation's insight
remaining airborne in a void for those
with causeless breath being held
affecting not its surroundings
forever stale ether locked
roiling chasms of fear
exuding odiferous spoilage
rotting
polluting
repelling

Such misery holds steady
among repeated indulgences of flesh
the masses' quintessential reptilian skin
long overdue for shedding

But cling it must
this resistance to reflection and growth
feeling safe in unknowing
the rewards of philological pondering

Sign and verbal
touch and smell
eye and ear
an all-sensitive motion
making ready transference from literal
to ethereal possession

For some
a chosen distance is preferred
a huddled observation from
deep in the abyss of ignorance
self-importance perishing alone
amidst a cacophony of unresolved noise
while wisdom's whisper
continues to thread hunger's needle 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 13, 2013
The masses seem forever locked in fear and false belief, while the few get beyond and become wise in time. It's always been so, but it cannot continue or the masses will overcome the wise and we will all suffer for it.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
Sign and verbal
touch and smell
eye and ear
an all-sensitive motion
making ready transference from literal
to ethereal possession

This is the nub of the matter to me, Odin. And that most unique image of wisdom's lingering whisper threading hunger's needle. I'm a little hung up on the WL quote you start with: I think the vibrations felt from music must transfer to the deaf audience its own wisdom and would question whether, in fact, wisdom is its own perceiver or interpreter. Perhaps I'm wondering whether wisdom is inherently innate or acquired and learned. Thank you for always, ALWAYS, making me think with your tapestry of understanding words. xx

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
So many sensations swirl around me as I read these lines. The prominent one being calmness. I feel a calmness coming off this writing, even as it drapes around its subject of rough-textured chaos; i.e., "discords of witlessness" "sickle waved ominously" "roiling chasms of fear" (and I especially like "reptilian skin/long overdue for shedding.") Creative way to say this: "feeling safe in unknowing." This piece delivers a monsterously ominous message with the fineness, beauty, slip and strength of 100% silk. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 12, 2013
we never truly shed all from our past do we nor fully choose the path forward.
budd


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