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· Patience Waning

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· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Truth is One


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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Candle Whispers

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

"Candles Never Lit" spawned this further exploration in the flame's purpose. Often, layered meanings come from unexpected places.

Wednesday, February 27, 2013

Candle Whispers

Moths and other creatures
find peril in hovering
especially above seductive candle flame

Yet

We sentient beings
hover not
instead
keep vigil over imagined messages
awaiting the magic
the comfort of vision

As we stare

Buried passions
encouraged by flame
make sacrificial
the walls of insulation
while our fortressed barriers
forfeit protection
dissolving resistance
becoming a river of liquefied defense

We wonder

Is the flame but deception
entrapment
subtle weaponry
seducing the innocent
destroying the gullible

Or

Is it pure light
ignitable by will
extinguishable by nature
its essence of imagination
weaving a ribbon of warmth
among the unlit kindling of love

For just as the cynical enemy
bounces its cold shadows of hurt
restlessly about the wall
waving its determinant position
one's heart beats echoes of defiance

Such are the candle's iconic images
empowering the ether of life
ever simple
ever flexible
even as its waxen folds
melt into mounds of spent energy
awaiting recycled resurrection

Darkness questions

But if we listen

Flame's inner glow whispers its promise to return


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Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 1, 2013
this candle poem has an even deeper impact than the other

because for me it's highly spiritual

again Odin, so worthwhile

john

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 28, 2013
The mystery of the candle's flame still entrances life.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 28, 2013
We sentient beings
hover not
instead
keep vigil over imagined messages
awaiting the magic
the comfort of vision

As we stare

I do the same thing over a blazing campfire in the woods - and to me it is magical.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2013
This poem gives off the feeling of 'being' with a candle flame, especially in the words "..unlit kindling of love," "ever simple/ever flexible." I like "Darkness questions" and "cold shadows of hurt." And the enchantment of the candle flame does exactly seem to "whisper" its promise to return." I also like the "imagined messages," for that is what people do...look to the flame as though it was a crystal ball. Good pairing for 'Candles Never Lit.' ~~ Diana


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