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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

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· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Me Me Played Out

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

How slave-like we struggle against such obvious man-made controls of who and what we are.

Saturday, March 9, 2013

Me Me Played Out

How prescient that first
Me Me, Mama
Pureed Pears
Ice cream
Cotton Candy
Gathering to satiate
Just for now

How slowly the
"Throw me the ball"
evolves into
"Give Me a kiss"
sending ego's Me galloping onto
"It's Me you need for this company"

Me
That ever present nag
Living out the foretelling
Oh so long ago
The fulfillment
Mommy and daddy said
Was for Me

Then

The Me once innocent meets a You
Meets Them
Meets It
Meets All
Along the way

Effusively
Demons wrestle the graduated Me of now
So small at first
Mere guilt-buddies then
Following Me from the corner candy store heist
To church
Where Me got neutralized
Chastised
Sanitized
Galvanized
For the moment

Stumbling Me

So indifferent to You
So often
So non-innocently
Me in battle armor

Yet
In spite of Me

My Me can reach this place
This place of nothing/everything
Where realization of place and time
Reveals the Me, the I, the It of all
But delusional comfort

After all

How else might the darkness
Ever know the necessary light
It's unqualified welcome
Until
The ever-illusive core accepts no end
To Me
To You
Them
It

How sagacious the conclusion
Existence' time and space sublime
Awaiting but the next form of love

For now
Exhaustion complete
Quintessence at peace


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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2013
I greatly appreciate how zoomed out is your writing of this Philosophy 401. It is like the human ego observed from a neighboring galaxy; i.e., that culminating "How sagacious the conclusion" and "Quintessence at peace." This progression feels like a door being opened slowly, revealing slice by visual slice what is in the room. Artful bookend implementing of:
Me, You Them, It, All -- ego evolution to enlightenment in those before/after stanzas. This beautiful trail of words ribbons out from the heaviness of earth life to zero point energy. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 10, 2013
Not since Freud analyzed the “I” has the “me” been so examined. Many thoughts passed through my mind as I coursed this life of “me.” One of them was, by being a twin, it was always “us.” As a result, sharing has always been an integral part of my life that I am grateful for.

A truly unique and wonderful rendering.

Ron

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on March 10, 2013
"the Me, the I, the It of all! An inspiring chance for every reader to see themselves portrayed within these words. Each life related as a personal story - undisclosed secrets and failures, successes and battles, all here for that reader to recognise.
Awesome!
Rx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 10, 2013
The Me once innocent meets a You
Meets Them
Meets It
Meets All
Along the way

You describe 'life' so well.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 10, 2013
'I' evaluated and taken to task
in short, stabbing lines, the style
as sharp as the evaluation;
this, Odin, is first rate

john

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 9, 2013
oh for it to be peaceful in the end
budd


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