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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Mind Carvings

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Attempting to define the essence of life's portrait can be daunting. What would we do without language, without words of texture and color to affix on the canvas?

Sunday, March 31, 2013


Poem Artwork
Mind Carvings

Mind relies on carvings to create what it thinks

How tensile this airless life
like a sponge submerged again and again
its weight becomes its intake from all around
seeks relief by disgorging

First a sprinkle
the droplets imagined
spurring cups to runneth over
to flood the pavement of fingers and hand
to float the point of pen
to glide this simple tool
on water ever floating
ice never melting
carving its language signposts
purging its past
welcoming thought's future

So it goes

This mind shaped by what it holds or makes
words but one tool of its amorphous lexicon
ever faithful to be drawn on surface
sung on air
painted on hearts in want

From letters to words
Becoming that which
refuses to be forgotten
patiently lingering in the shadows
anticipating its own discovery


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 1, 2013
The characters of the alphabet, put together in millions of words, and these words placed in trillions of combinations describing our verbal language and mental skills adds up to a lot of communication and mis-communication.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on April 1, 2013
yes the anticipation and the discovery
budd

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on March 31, 2013
As usual it is challenging to describe your work, even to say what I think of it or how it makes me feel (more than a little intimidated, often). But perhaps I've understood enough this time because I've known a sculptor or two. That old saw, "how did you know there was a person/bird/dog in that stone?" fits the mind carving as well. And that you have the insight and courage to mold that memory by steadily chipping away at it while it cheers you on, anxious to see what it will become ... a past not yet created.


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