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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Mind's Labor Camps

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Accepting we create our own reality is often a slow lifelong revelation.

Thursday, May 16, 2013


Poem Artwork
Mind's Labor Camps
by Odin Roark

As one's sun rises

How surreal the sky seems
When suspension relies only on hope
Where sunlight can sear the mind's cornea
Rain make murky the vision
And air never carry
Fragrance of flowers
Only odorous threats
Of anticipated pain

Such becomes an illusion
Realized in the mind's solitary struggle
From birth to death
Parental captivity
To corporate slavery
Through familial obsessions

As acquiescence
Battles tenacity's belligerence
Ethereal puppet strings
Hold
Break
Dangle lifeless

Struggling efforts
Gravel among the residuum
Victims of solipsism
Fighters of munificence
The crawling
The stumbling
The running
Eventually becoming aware
Conquering odds
Is by choice

As one's sun sets
 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 17, 2013
Wisdom comes slow to some, especially the youth whose hormones drive them away from reality until they're caught up in paternity and the drudgery of life and work. But in the end, is it worth it?

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 17, 2013
Quite a title, poem, and picture.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on May 17, 2013
much to consider in this before the sunset
budd

Reviewed on May 16, 2013
Parental captivity, to corporate slavery, through familial obsessions. One begins to wonder if in fact they have any choices at all. Leaving the comfort zone of familiarity is not so east perhaps.


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