AuthorsDen.com  Join | Login 

 
Where Authors and Readers come together!

Authors | Books | Audiobooks | eBooks | Signed Bookstore | Stories | Articles | Poetry | Blogs | News | Events | Reviews | Videos | Success | Gold Members | Testimonials

Featured Authors:  Diane Hundertmark, iRaven West, i Aberjhani, iCheri Clifton, iSam Vaknin, iTom Kitt, iAntoinette Kopperfield, iDeborah Frontiera, iRoxanne Howe-Murphy, iChristine Boyce, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Odin odin@aflx.com

 Follow Me  

· 4,268 titles
· 12,669 Reviews
· Share with Friends!
· Save to My Library
·
Member Since: Jul, 2008

   Sitemap
   My Blog
   Contact Author
   Read Reviews



Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

         More poetry...

Odin odin@aflx.com, click here to update your web pages on AuthorsDen.

Books by
Odin odin@aflx.com











See all Books
by Odin odin@aflx.com


   
  Share   Print   Save   

Tears Never Wept

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

At times, compassion seems to be in rare supply.

Thursday, May 30, 2013


Poem Artwork
Tears Never Wept
by Odin Roark

Like a lonely child
Straddling a playground seesaw
Sentiment's sorrow
Fear's discovery

How bold we carry our heartache
Anchored deep in learned
Teeter-totter discipline
Allowing our eyes to close
But never to weep

Tomorrow we will make anew
This resolve to suck it up
Absolving the pain
Forgiving the cause

When still...

The night will come
Our eyes will remain open ‘til dawn
Hoping to see a someone
A something to counter
Life's fulcrum of imbalance

A phone will ring
A doorbell will sound
A hand wave will appear in the distance
Certainly it will happen

But

Beneath heavy tear ducts
Passion's gamble seems doubtful
Life's playground might fill again
Unlikely offering a smile
To sit atop the other end

If only

Children of all ages
Knew simple happiness
Takes but willing effort
Presented with a smile opposite hope
Experience ups and downs together
Releasing tears of sadness and joy

Together


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?

Reviewed on June 1, 2013
this poem speak of hope yet, I feel so much sorrow in it. thought provoking in that compassion can take away many a tear shed or unshed.

Reviewed by Teresa Walker
Reviewed on May 31, 2013
Tears cleanse the soul, Odin. Jesus wept in the garden of Gethsemane for mankind. Luke 23:28

A cathartic cleansing to the soul.

I have experienced crying with people I don't even know while praying with them. It is as if I am a conduit from God to hear them and let them purge their souls through me. An awesome feeling...yet cleansing for those who trust someone that believes.

Thank you for these words,

Together...sorrow and joy, liquid pearls!



Teresa

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 30, 2013
People are often teeter-tottering on the edge of loneliness, unhappiness. But tears should only flow when they do so in the moment of sadness, and not brought on falsely appear to be empathetic when you're not. It's okay not to cry. And it's okay to cry when that happens.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on May 30, 2013
a wonderful write my friend with as always so much depth to be read several times
budd

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on May 30, 2013
You spoil us, Odin. Keep it coming.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2013
Your poems are all powerful enough to stand alone, but this posted picture captures the essence of this writing so well I must say it widens the effect of this stunning poem. There is such substance in this that it reads for me the way cracking a geode reveals a glinting purple wonder. The glisten in this poem is how precisely you have given us the feel of 'lonely,' the importance of 'trust,' the relevance of 'mutuality.' Stanza one has "Sentiment's sorrow" giving us 'human,' and "Fear's discovery" giving us 'teacher.' How perfect is "Teeter-totter discipline" in addressing 'trust and lack of.' Not to be missed in the last two stanzas are: 'doubt in potentials,' and a finish of this poem with a beautiful answer. What a keeper this is. ~~ Diana


New Poetry by Odin odin@aflx.com
hhh