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One's Lesser Twin

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

It is easy to forget sometimes how synergistic everything is at one time or another. Personification helps.

Sunday, June 9, 2013


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One’s Lesser Twin
by Odin Roark

Everyone’s got one
The hand that uses a mitt
To catch the ball
You know
That other fingered appendage
Whose achievements
Claim to fame
Is without celebration
Save the privilege
Of wearing the wrist watch
And of course
Saving the game…occasionally

Comparison with its double
Hampers its best effort
Knowing full well
Writing
Affixing a signature
Opens many doors
Locked to the minor assistant

Yet

Hope knows reward
For in Homer’s Elysian Fields
Located on Earth’s western edge
By the stream of Okeanos
Shortcomings will find solace
Short straws
Becoming the long
Affording privilege
While the once favored
Will provide support

Dream of such moments
My lesser twin
For time rushes forward

Even as I pen this thought
And your shielding hand
Holds at bay
The cheating eyes of our school days
Now grown adult
They remain anxious
Ready to continue
Their cheating and stealing

Forget not

As our shadows eventually merge
Into the underworld
Fate’s right hand too
Will sigh its relief
No longer to carry
Expectation’s burden
The baton will have passed
To the lessor twin

Carpe Diem



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Reviewed by Teresa Walker
Reviewed on June 10, 2013
It is strange you wrote this yesterday, today I asked myself who am I? The other one answered; many things to different people, a free spirit being true to oneself.
My life is many things, but enjoy the change in the other twin behavior when she comes out. Her creatures habit moves to the beat of normal day to day disciplines. The free spirit comes alive while writing, dancing, hiking, traveling to new countries to the tune of a different drummer.

She is,
Carpe Diem
Teresa

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 10, 2013
I believe you referred to the “lesser twin” as your soul. I took a more literal course since I am the dominant one of a pair of identical twins. My hands have also been paralyzed, causing me to pass some of my “right-handed functions” to my left. In either perspective, the poem speaks to me.

Ron

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on June 10, 2013
Odin,

Excellent write, Odin, and graphic!

Many blessings,
+Linda

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on June 9, 2013
there is so much going on here my friend
budd


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