The Untainted
by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com
With so many sentient gifts ignored or abused, how dangerously close might the resultant evolutionary reality be?
Tuesday, July 16, 2013
The Untainted
by Odin Roark
New tide’s blinking
Sending flotsam drifting shoreward
Where water depth changed by oceans’ swallow
Show decaying pylons
Once supporting boardwalk simplicity
Sun worshipers urge summer heat
To darken lathered skin
As abandoned Coppertone bottle
Joins ancient water’s perpetual visits
Of ebb and tide
Gull-feathered patience gliding above
Gazes at innocent children molding sand castles
Where Triscuit-step-paths
Meet up to draw-bridge Wasa crackers
Held secure by breadstick timbers
Cemented with sea weed’s sticky sand
Bronze effigies awash in gull-white convenience
History’s commemorative life lost on tempest waves
Goes unnoticed as it overlooks
The coming and going of storybook sand castles
Adults-in-progress
Such is entitlement’s escape-to-the-sun
Where pleasure-obsessed addiction
Remains ensconced in seaside delusion
Holding to beach days past
When beer-enhanced-love once celebrated
Slipped to Perrier-Jouët pretense
Self-deception
Imbibed
Discarded
Becoming tomorrow’s human jetsam
Drifting aimlessly below
Origin’s forever exhalation
Updrafts of salty air
Seeking untainted conscious life
Somewhere
Anywhere
Splendor in the updrafts of salty air. Three days past
ocean waves...azure seas..sand castles giggles as the
waves roll in...playing on the beach with our son.
Pristine at one time!!
Somewhere~Anywhere~Unaware
Lady May Ann
Ron
Anywhere
Unaware
Can't write all I want on this one right now, Odin... I'll add more later... but this is a righteous write, brother.
Roger