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Buttonhole Daisy

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

With so many ways to cope with city life, one can never be surprised at what might prove effective.

Tuesday, August 27, 2013


Poem Artwork
Buttonhole Daisy
by Odin Roark

My city bud and I
How we love the long walks
Daisy beneath my chin
Tucked securely in a buttonhole
Me with discovery in my eye
Maneuvering ever changing trail signs

We walk these precipitous canyons
This forest without trees
‘cause that’s what a New Yorker does
and if nature be your thing
you take it with you

My feet tread upon sidewalk and road
Concrete and asphalt
Candy wrappers and dog doings
As safely harnessed in
Daisy wriggles for joy
Knowing it’s only for a day
But it’s her bucket list

Together we drink in
Vast canyons of rock and nesting pitches
Forged atop dry beds
Where once flowers and soil aired freely
Fowl and beast danced in synchronous survival
Unaware evolution’s drumbeat was creating
Esplanades of another kind

Here where once crept moccasin-feet
Ever conscious of disturbing precious surroundings
Remain but a buried imprint beneath
Urban scree and mountainous bastions

Afternoon brings overhead sunshine
Peeking into the ravines
Where ant-like motion smothers the surface
Scurrying left and right
Many going nowhere

Still the light reaches us
Warming our journey
Through dens and caves of onlookers
Perhaps wondering as well
Where did all the trees go?

By nightfall
Daisy begins to droop her head
A long day taking in so much
Has left little room for the jungle
That darkness of a city’s life
Where red and blue lights flash incessantly
Alternating with sirens
And blasts of police car Urp Urps
Giving habitual warning
Don’t attack
Don’t hit
Don’t fire
Don’t exercise evolution’s beast-like modernity

By sunrise
We arrive back at our own brownstone cave
Where sitting next to the vase of her kin
Waiting a turn to take their first time walk
Their last time remembrance
Where something besides captivity in a vase
Will fill their final hours

I take a very droopy daisy from my buttonhole
Lay her to rest beneath another page of my diary
Lift the pen to record our day
Smile at the other daisies
Knowing their bucket list will be filled as well
And begin my daily entry

She loves me
She loves me not
She loves me…


    


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Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on March 14, 2014
"Here where once crept moccasin feet " - love that. Always wonder who walked, hunted, fished in past. What lies far beneath the biggest cities in the U.S. Covered with concrete layers upon layers we will never know. Have friends who live in remote area along Tennessee river and they have walked along the shoreline finding so many arrowheads head. s.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on October 7, 2013
~Odin~
Understanding the whirl and layers of the city
you capture so well.

Daisy smiles.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed on August 29, 2013
No other city can capture that canyon feel. They are just not built to do it. there is something about the energy that seems alive. You've brought back a particular feeling of how that city moves, The coldness of the place. yet having lived there you know humanity does exist in large doses at times. I think the city loves you.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on August 28, 2013
The giant stirs
The ink flows
The phrases sparkle
It's magic.

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on August 27, 2013
Precious, and I do mean precious! Urban adventure through the eyes of a daisy! I feel your connection, as much you to it as it to you. The dynamics of a city once trod by moccasin, wonderful imagery! M.True

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2013
This is incredibly beautiful. Beginning with the "My city bud and I," which naturally had me thinking 'bud' a person. And then the daisy comes to life and the ride is gorgeous, and exhilarating and even made me hold less disdain for the stink and cram of cities, only because of your "and if nature be your thing/you take it with you." How optimistic that line...'create your own happiness' sort of thing. The daisy's 'bucket list,' is ingenious...I love that. This piece glows from within a button hole..the light and warmth of sun through "..dens and caves of onlookers." That she is tired, that she rests beneath a diary page at journey's end, and the other daisies will have their day. All these chosen words feel nakedly delivered by a velvet hand and an open heart that even cement has not been able to harden. Bravo, Odin! ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on August 27, 2013
this one gives me pause to contemplate
budd


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