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Warriors Never Sleep

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A prosetry exercise in nonsense… for some.

Thursday, October 17, 2013


Poem Artwork
Warriors Never Sleep
by Odin Roark

How subtle his pen
Barely moving from
Left to right
Opinion to fact
What if to perhaps

Words these were

How relaxed my hypnotic state
Fingers inner-laced atop my irregular breathing state
Sounds emitting form reluctant lips
Fearful to ride the expunged air
To reach his ears

Might they be heard as betrayal?

Jesus how I’d learned the Id’s instinctual power
The super-ego’s warrior-quest of protection
And the Ego
That mediating asshole’s reality check

Were I but parroting conscious experience
Or was the roll out of sounds
A regurgitation of my subterranean privacy
My lair’s howl
The warrior-protected part of my mind

The only part left
It seemed

At least that was the shrink’s opinion

Oh how he tried
Oh how the pen did perform its dervish moves
It’s tapping cadence
It’s lip massage while waiting

All the while

That look of understanding
I hated that

Father
Grandfather
Mythical sage
All in one

The bastard

But hey

Choices were few
I’d murdered three people
So I’d said

The state wanted to find out
Was it true ?

Ask Mr. Id
I’d told them

And asking they were doing

The 10-9-8-7
Finger snap
The endless drill of endless sessions

Eyes open

His pen raised
Clock showing straight up
Session over

For now

Taking the hand of my warrior
He winked
We shuffled out
 


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on October 20, 2013
How much control, that inner self? Driver of get-away cars and instigator of all manner of subversive plots. Ego and armor being one and the same. Actions always seeming much more rational when dressed in Napoleonic garb. M.True

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 19, 2013
A truly fascinating exercise.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 18, 2013
My thoughts were poked, too. ;-) Shrinks will do that to ya.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on October 18, 2013
The urge, the control, the moral overlay, and the judge v. the writer's wit. I'm with the writer.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on October 18, 2013
very thought provoking to me
budd


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