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Perspective's Malaise

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When does vicarious living reach its tipping point?

Sunday, October 20, 2013


Poem Artwork
Perspective's Malaise
by Odin Roark

How rich the vicarious
to be but not to be
that safe haven of lookie loos
where arms length from reality
provides never-having-to-leave the fighter's corner of illusion

To wander in shoes
not yours
to sweat in passion's fold
imagined yours
all from the bliss of wide-screen pleasures

To know
pine tree fragrance by picture alone
Dudamel magic from distant audience seat
recorded rather than real

Packaged emotion made temporary
is to avoid the answered door of the actual
always open
inviting risk of touch
admitting not the harlequin jester
with jingle bells attached
but those with outstretched hands and heart

Spoil alert

Fantasy's sleight of hand
delusion's feathery plumes to distract
engulf the willing
repulse the knowing

To accept the gold watch for accomplishment
might be to know a struggle
but is it the reward of being who you are
or the perpetuation of what you're not? 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 20, 2013
I have been fortunate to have experienced much of our world up close and personal. Now, I'm confined to the boob tube of delights and the entangle of Internet connections. I rail at those whose experience is confined to family, work, and leisure... knowing nothing of reality from their confined little worlds.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on October 20, 2013
This poem resonates with too much truth as health denies up close and personal and "life" becomes the computer screen. M.True

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on October 20, 2013
Oh yes, there is much wisdom here. Who knows the value of what he owns better than one who has lost it all? Who knows the sheer joy of breathing free like one who must see it from a prison? Who knows the love of another human better than one who must visit a grave? And no victory is quite the same to the one who has tasted defeat.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 20, 2013
I have to agree with the premise that those living the vicarious life are NOT geared to reality for the most part. One clue to this is that a famous actor has made the statement that the man in the White House deserves a third term.

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2013
There is an inherently virtual evisceration implied here, or is it real? To authenticate the actual may be a job for an actuary, and yet it is the forte of the film-maker to venerate the viewer, if not marginalize her entirely (and I speak with the universal 'her')... you've sensitively handled this topic in a lexicon laced with metaphor that serves up an icy shower for those absorbed with the steamy romance of tele-visual delight... your background and your predilection for realism instead of fantasy suits you well for this task. I like the way you imply that the virtual trumps the real when it comes to emotions and other matters of the heart... you've given us much to ponder and contemplate here, Odin... this is fodder, fuel, and feisty fire at its finest! Congratulations, Odin. I really think it is one of your very best.

Roger


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