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Spartan Riches

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Both nature and man’s creativity are subject to paying the price for such existence. Sadly, little remains free to just be.

Saturday, November 2, 2013


Poem Artwork
Spartan Riches
by Odin Roark

Creation asks not for center stage

How plentiful these quiet treasures
Demanding not a price
Void of glitter
Gaff
And loud acclaim drowning
Senses
Reason

Imagination pursues instead
Honesty’s nod
The up and down gesture
Everyday patrons volunteer
On discovering virtuosity’s subtle essence

Just as a flower needs but sunshine and moisture
So too the Van Goghs of everyday living
Patiently await man’s simple willingness
To emote with the light of a smile
Perhaps even tears
Knowing as in nature
Creative efforts spawn
Reciprocal wavelengths of appreciation
Finding respite wherever
An honest heart and mind’s tuning fork awaits

Often

Creation senses not the obvious
Artistry’s honorific slips
Obliging a personage quest
Unaware resultant luminary trappings
Often engender insecurities
Petrifying life’s inner sanctum
That place where inception seeds the unknown
Bestows lasting memories
Where both a mother’s caress
And the brush strokes of oiled color
Add to the canvas of expectancy’s
Freely shared gifts and rewards

Too late at times

Inspiration succumbs to notoriety’s demands
Obliging a servitude to fame
Risking enslavement
Either to gilded prisons
Or the bridled razor wire of power
Needing to gallop down a home stretch
Willingly adding to the blood-laden turf
Determined the day’s finish line
Will provide yet another carrot
To satiate the bestial appetite for superiority

Fortunately

A meaningful number
Manage to avoid a system’s pandering
Obviating trophydom’s trap
Existing solely as creation’s flow
Appeasing those whose hearts and minds
Seek but revelation of impact
A seeding of possible enlightenment
Respecting the virtue of namelessness

So goes the Spartan riches
Accumulating with anonymous authenticity
Giving it’s own reciprocal nod
Back to that which inspires creativity

All without demands

Without price
  


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Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on November 4, 2013
Awesome. You really nailed it. Very well penned indeed. "Respecting the virtue of namelessnes" makes me think of the "Tao ". Love it.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 4, 2013
Just as a flower needs but sunshine and moisture
So too the Van Goghs of everyday living
Patiently await man’s simple willingness
To emote with the light of a smile

Marvelous sentiments.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 3, 2013
A very interesting take on how creativity survives even an environment that is highly restricted by the powers that be. Innovation and creativity cannot be held back, but will be pursued regardless of prohibitions.

Ron

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on November 2, 2013
...and as nibbles go, this nibble at the ear of artistry for the sake of the artisans everywhere is but a tease to tantalize those urbane enough to admit that esoteric impressions won't win the day in an artless age where the meaning of a poem eludes all but the most ardent admirers who pass off their misinterpretations as the genuine article and immediately attach it to some spectacularly laudatory noun fit to be hung for all to see in their humble pie house of ill repute... where all mixed metaphors would be proud to die!

Roger

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on November 2, 2013
Inspiration succumbs to notoriety’s demands/Obliging a servitude to fame... sharp as the cut of a diamond - I have known the hopeful, creating in their lifelong efforts, just to be seen or heard. True creativity, as you so aptly point out, is as quiet as nature itself. M.True

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 2, 2013
Your words flowed smoothly and delicately, Odin, as you summarized and gave voice to these "Spartan Riches." I suppose eventually we will push further into these Spartan Riches and the planet will begin to push back in form of hunger worldwide because the wheat fields, et al, will have been so decimated there is nothing more for them to give. I can visualize days when civilization regurgitates itself back to bloody bands scouring the land for survival by any means. It is not a pretty picture.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 2, 2013
Behold a panoply of insights into the human condition
told from the perspective of a gifted philosopher
with the skill of high poetry
yet understandable by all who search and wonder.


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