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Thanksgiving Versus Thankstaking

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Unfortunately,this holiday season is going to be very bleak for those continuing to suffer job loss or the running out of their unemployment benefits. Let's hope some "job creating" congressmen take a long look in the mirror. (Ain't that a joke?) And let's also hope that "stuffing" and "stuff" or lack of, will forge some inner gifts of love for yet another hate contaminated period of this country's history. Maybe the cynic in me is suffering from too much meditation on reality, but... well, you be the judge.

Saturday, November 23, 2013


Poem Artwork
Thanksgiving Versus Thankstaking
by Odin Roark

In the left corner
Thankstaking
Weighing in at a
Portly indulgence of
Gross lies and veiled sleight-of-hand judgments
With the advantage reach of too many terms at the head of the table
Forever obliging friends and family to skirt the real nourishment
And occupy but the perimeter seats of obfuscated survival scraps

In the right corner
Thanksgiving
Tipping the scales of history lost
With a mere modicum of weighted appreciation
Trying as it might to stare down its worthy opponent
It nevertheless stands tall for the feast of the fittest
Knowing that only with tempered rumination of words and avoidance of gristled ear
Can it win back the hearts of the diet-wary gluttons
And the indecisive ringside hopefuls

The winner of this dichotomy of give and take
Will meet the all-time wonder of the iconic nemeses
Jolly Red Giant
Arriving within a month by the mere twinkling of an eye
With yet even more to take than to give
Oh, the excitement of it all
Gobble gobble do and ring a ding ding   


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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 25, 2013
The most unworthy taker of all is the regal inheritor. He or she does nothing but choose his parents wisely. On the other hand to swim upstream against 200 million other sperm--and win--is quite a feat.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 24, 2013
You have struck on a long concern of mine. That is that there are givers and there are takers… And they seem to be rather equally divided. You are writing about the takers who somehow figure out a way to feed their greed and hoard it like some great accomplishment that everyone should admire. That is true, and I abhor that kind of behavior, especially when it is practiced by the members of our representative government.

On the other hand there are those who are simply lazy. You find them in every family and every workplace. They never give, or, if forced to, give very little. But they are very good at taking, and take all they can whenever they can. I have seen people with good incomes come to a Thanksgiving dinner and eat their fill like gluttons without ever paying or working for any of it, and then taking home as many leftovers as they can get their hands on so they don't have to cook or go to restaurants for the rest of the week.

In the meantime, those unemployed you are speaking of, are losing their houses, their cars, and are unable to feed themselves and their families… Even with unemployment and food stamps, dwindling as I write.

There is certainly something wrong with this picture. We are certainly not all created equal, but we should share what we have with some equality in mind.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 24, 2013
very apt with just the right satire
budd

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 24, 2013
Let's hope some "job creating" congressmen take a long look in the mirror. (Ain't that a joke?)

They'll be looking in the mirror all right - making sure their expensive, tailored suits look good for the cameras - while they babble on endlessly about nothing, and do nothing at all to make this nation a better place for its down and out citizens.

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on November 23, 2013
Keen satire and a trenchant wit at the end of that venomous pen you wield as a sharp two-edged sword, Odin. Let's hope the feast of the fittest doesn't end up in a famine for the famished this year. The Lord help those who get caught helping themselves, as they say!

Roger


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