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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Preference Manifest

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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Old Friend

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As one gets older, one can’t help but imagine good times past…and maybe to come. How lonely it must be for the lonely.

Saturday, November 30, 2013


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Old Friend
by Odin Roark

Now I am so cold
The overhead florescent light
Carries me back
Where last I saw you
Making my eyelids heavy with sorrow
Then…
And now

With your signature red kerchief
Draped ‘round your neck
How forlornly moved your tumor-burdened eyes

As they led you off
You glanced back
The remembrance of our joyful days
Remained reflected in your painful eyes

A part of me’s happy though
Happy you never had to play with this human trick
Life support sucks you know

See ya shortly old friend
Gonna be throwin’ your rubber ball
Or your favorite stick soon

Very soon

 


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Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on December 2, 2013
~Odin~
Or your favorite stick soon. A glance to joyful days.
Keegan pulling his red wagon with Chakana. Her last ride.
Forever friends.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on December 2, 2013
they are the best and closest of our dearest friends
budd

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on December 1, 2013
Superb: Hmmm, I don't think our best friend can be replaced, each life is unique. One thing is for certain sure, if our pets aren't in heaven then it's going to be rather lonely.
Yet there is more depth and breadth here. Death is seen as a failure we keep people artificially alive. It is doubled edged. To be or not..., TY



Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 1, 2013
Our pets can be some of our best friends because they are so loyal and give so much attention to us… So eloquently described by the eyelids in this poem. You also bring up a social conundrum. Why we euthanize our pets to to save them unnecessary suffering and torture our human loved ones with unnecessary treatments and life support until their pain makes them unconscious of us anyway.

Ron

Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on December 1, 2013
One fortunate thing about dogs, they can be replaced. Unlike people who are gone from us till we join them in eternity. That fact never takes away from the feelings expressed in this piece Odin. That feeling can easily cross over for those people in our lives. A well done poem. Bob

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 1, 2013
I hope that last part is true for all of us.

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on December 1, 2013
A part of me’s happy though
Happy you never had to play with this human trick
Life support sucks you know

It has to be better that way.
Rx

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on November 30, 2013
It is odd how even painful memories can sometimes trick us into a melancholy smile. M.True

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 30, 2013
Love separated by a promise also sucks.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 30, 2013
A moving and meaninful poem, Odin. Bittersweet. Well done. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 30, 2013
Ahhh . . . Perfect! Yes.


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