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Wounds Into Scars

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I often wonder why love and self-love have become so distorted with many adults.

Monday, January 13, 2014


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Wounds Into Scars
by Odin Roark

It takes not a wise man to know
What we resist
Will persist

So goes the healing process
Just as a tree
With its heart and initial carvings
Carries its scars with little notice
So too might we carry our own
Those verbal
Physical
Spiritual
Lacerations
Often a suffering performance
As if they were for public view

The small child knows early
“Kiss the booboo”
And mothers are quick to reinforce
The child’s need

But as we grow
We forget the essence of a mother’s care
The mother’s empowering way
To repair with love

Instead

Many wear pain and sorrow on their lapels
Trusting a confused society
Often glorifying pain
Placing many an open wound
Before audience-sympathy
Unknowingly substituting exploitation
For the teachings of maternal empathy

How wanting one’s instincts can become
Innate reaction to hurt
Once serviced by natural response
Too often succumbs to ego pampering
Rather than seeking the axiom therein

That place where accepting the hurt
Seduces pain into questioning
Bringing to bear
The precarious courage
To learn the lesson
Of self-love’s curative

Might it be
Like mother nature’s engraved trees
At any age affliction reminds us
Growing is still the purpose
Injuries and scars inevitable

Like the tree
Perhaps it’s really a question
Of how we absorb
And treat ourselves
From within



 


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on January 16, 2014
With the capitalistic overview that all knowledge, ideas, creativity, etc. are, sooner or later to be relinquished as the rightful property of the "corporation" (to which we are all invariably chained), our pride and admiration of such things has become severely diminished. Thus, our failings and our personal injuries take on more of a glorified status, as this is all that we have left to compare in our lives. M.True

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 14, 2014
A lot to think about. Affliction certainly brings out the need for mothering, or at least, care. When I see people going through the pain of adding a tattoo to their bodies as if to carry with them a mark of some distinction: "I endured much to get this symbol I'm carrying and showing to you." I often wonder why these people so unlike the way nature made them that they have to tinker with it to be noticed.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 14, 2014
You hit on it, Odin. Most of our wounds are self inflicted. Even though another person may harm us or wound us we have, so many times, allowed it to happen. Even so we allow that person to remain in our sphere if life to absorb more pain. So whose fault is it? Really?

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 14, 2014
May we all continue to grow.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on January 14, 2014
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