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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· Truth is One


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Inordinate Flame

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While some agonize over their wills, their funeral arrangements, their burial details, others know a truth beyond preparation. Such are the many unidentified, buried at Potter’s Field on Hart’s Island, isolated between the Bronx and Manhattan.

Tuesday, February 4, 2014


Poem Artwork
Inordinate Flame
by Odin Roark

Back then
Working behind cold water flat walls
Electrical power
A dream
Hot running water
A fantasy
His candle
Life saving

Under meager light
Flew his nubby pencil
The written napkins piling
The passion recorded
Their accessibility
Questionable

So went this simple being
Bereft of fancy clothes
Old Spice grooming
Even everyday shoes

Such plight was embraced
For he had no regrets
No aspiration to become
Tomorrow’s populist extinction

Willing to just be
Who he was
What was his experience
How such might empower

Times proved hard

Odd jobs paid the rent
Two-burner cooked the stew
Re-melted candles
Made the light

Finally

Regrets absent
His pencil
His napkins
Joined him

As Hart’s Island
Gave final solace
To another who labored anonymously
Died anonymously
Was buried
Anonymously

Deep down
His small candle
Remained an inordinate flame
  


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on February 11, 2014
Every soul has a story. The final chapter, a place where bones are buried.

Reviewed on February 5, 2014
This is touching and I don't mean that as a stamped response, there's purpose in everything. Many beautiful lines to be, should be, read.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 5, 2014
So many were buried that way, anonymously without markers. If this poet existed, what a treasure it would be to open the grave and still be able to read the poetry jotted down on napkins so long ago.

Another great story…

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 5, 2014
I just finished the documents of which you speak, splashed on my Old Spice, and now heading out to learn about my health issues. I guess I am paperwork ahead of the unidentified souls but no better off.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 5, 2014
There are far too many Potter's Fields all around the world today, and unless we somehow change our ways, there will be many more.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 4, 2014
as do we all
budd


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