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Ambition's Taw

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

People have been playing marbles and marble-like games for thousands of years. It is thought that marbles started with the cave-people playing with small pebbles or balls of natural clay. Clay balls have been found in the tombs of Egypt, they have also been found in Native American burial grounds. They have also been discovered in the ancient Aztec pyramids. In recent history, boys (and tomboys) used to play marbles in the vacant lots of the world. Circles drawn in the dirt around mibs (targeted marbles) in the center became the primary focus of every day’s awakening. Players anxiously awaited their turn to step up to the circle, curl a “taw” (sometimes called the shooter) between their fingers, take aim, and try to take all the marbles. Sadly goes the Terrorist's version of the game in continuum. (Photo by Gary Gay)

Saturday, February 15, 2014


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Ambition's Taw
by Odin Roark

Skipping worn Keds beneath laughter
yesterday's jettisoned leaves
soon to become IED shrapnel
our ingrained images born of
eyes afire with anticipation
peering at the unknown
seeing where horizons fall endlessly
like sunlight chasing the night

Our fist full of marbles
security for the journey
seeking challenging games
in daddy's adult world

Playground lessons
mibs in the circle of growing up
colors changing
translucent some
opaque others
steelies the prize
all for the taking
aim your taw

Rules for the game
from sandlot
to asphalt alleys
to the potholes and trenches of battlefields
remain the same
save the cost of the game

Taws perfected early on
by classroom
schoolyard
graduation
and boot camp
Rolling the taw between life's fingers
Sharpening instincts for the game

Sometimes we rest
staring at ceilings
beneath shelters from fear
or gilded maxima of temporary joy

Yet

Our eyes
remain unfulfilled like dry beds of earth
awaiting the rain
gazing skyward for answers

The pockets of marbles
now replaced by dusty rocks

or

ammo clips

or

green hundreds

or for some

The bent fingers clinched about
their own casket handles

Beware the misguided fingers
poised ready about the stock

The trigger

The taw

Picking mibs
 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 16, 2014
Childhood memories and stark modern reality in juxtaposition. For some reason we never used the words "taw" or "mib" in my childhood marble playing and hoarding. We had a good use for junk marbles… They make good ammunition for slingshots that could very well become a silent, but deadly, killer. Knocking out the opponent's mib is akin to warfare in the playground, translated to knocking out the enemy in the theater of war. Nice metaphor.

Ron

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on February 16, 2014
We learned those strategies and goals early, didn't we? How perverse they've become down the generations, hand in glove with technology. Winner take all. How willing we were to grovel in the dirt or crawl on our knuckles for so small a prize. Another bulls-eye, Odin.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 16, 2014
I was an avid marble player back in my growing up days. Sorry, Odin, when we played marbles in my formative years I can't recall thinking of more grownup games of killing people on the battle ground. Never. I did, however have my GI Joe's, and with those I pitched battle to thwart the Japs and Krauts. Guess using those two words is not in the best taste, but then, neither were they.

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on February 15, 2014
So many of us to have already lost our marbles. Sigh... Despite its cutthroat nature it is not as much fun to be standing idly by, watching and not playing the game. M.True

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 15, 2014
another keeper from you my friend
budd


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