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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Puzzle Pieces

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Like a jigsaw puzzle, much of what we start often seems to go unfinished. Perhaps there’s a reason. (Painting by Robert Dowling)

Wednesday, February 19, 2014


Poem Artwork
Puzzle Pieces
by Odin Roark

How troublesome the process
This jigsaw puzzlement of completion

That piece of apology
Impatiently gnawing at conscience
Never uttered
Forever evading the moment

The congratulatory gesture
Ever studied for the right angle
The approach that would empower
Not merely pander to an ego

The closure unattended
Acceptance of grieving’s unfamiliar form
The not-yet-ready release from
Mistake’s stubbornly suffocating choke

Even saying I love you
Remains held in abeyance
Fearful of misjudged reaction
Forcing rejection once again

Yet…

Patience remains as always
Our least respected
And most willing protector

Might forbearance have but one goal?

The simplest move of all

Acceptance of the game

Oh how we question
Engagement of challenge
The forever-perplexing summons
The curves
Angles
Miscalculated chances

When life’s countdown only asks
We respect commitment
Without need for interlocking
For conquest
Or gain

That winning is non sequitur
To mortality’s premise
That always-alive existence
Provides tireless refinement
For the countless puzzle pieces
Yet to ponder









 


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on February 21, 2014
without the challenge there is only atrophy, or so they would have us believe... one often finds the bliss in periods "timed out", yet without the acts of "living life" would there be a greater chance that we might go unnoticed? And wouldn't that be worse? M.True

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 20, 2014
I think your writing that life is constantly throwing challenges that we have to solve and we never quite get all the pieces right. But perseverance in spite of failure is our greatest ally in reaching some satisfaction for a life well without all the answers. Some killer phrases.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 20, 2014
Couldn't agree more, we are bound by duty, et al, but for the most part we just skim the surface and cast our eyes to another project.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 19, 2014
as you say acceptance and patience are the keys
budd


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