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Elegy For My Candle

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Personifying the fantasy of one’s inanimate traveling companion begs a strange, but loving closure. (Photo by Karen Ruimy)

Monday, February 24, 2014


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Elegy For My Candle
by Odin Roark

How regal your stature has been
Your stalwart frame
Ever remaining at the ready
Patiently waiting to live out
Your inner tether
Your heart’s offering
To a romantic’s touch

You’ve served me well
Been carried to cabin
Backpacked to basecamp
Returned with me
To nestle beside my hand
Pen
Paper
Our home

Yes

You’ve succumbed to gravity
Like this aging body of mine
Both aware time melts away
Having given space to breathe

For being my breath of luminance
For embracing the flame
For sacrifice
For selfless giving
Even now in your final hours
For that
I thank you

Without your lighthouse guidance
My journey’s dreams
Might have been lost to murky despair

How giving you’ve been
Allowing your body to dwindle
By flame’s consuming needs
And now…

The end must be painful
Your warm tears pooling
Their final remembrance
As our room becomes dim

So comforting to know
The offspring of your light
Will remain fixed
Ink upon paper
Word upon word
Pain upon pain
Joy upon joy

Can you stay just…




 


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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on February 26, 2014
I like how this poem's subject could have been anything in the beginning, were one not aware of the title or presuming the photo was the subject. You created exquisite progression in cooling off the heat and light and life....deftness in "whhh-ing" out the flicker in this last line. Far-reaching presciousness in "..offspring of your light." Sensual and sensitive poem, Odin. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 26, 2014
Marvelous - and I've often thought similar thoughts about many a dying campfire in the woods.

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on February 25, 2014
I used to have a drip candle, (started on top of a bottle of Gallo wine). It was nearly three feet tall when the dog knocked it over. M.True

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 25, 2014
Incredible personification! Many humans of stature would wish to have a eulogy like that, and didm't get one. Can I be your pen in my next life?

Ron

Reviewed on February 24, 2014
Love this!! You are very creative!!

Sandie

Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on February 24, 2014
Beautiful.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 24, 2014
what a beautiful tribute
budd

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on February 24, 2014
~Odin~
Beautiful visions of embracing the flame.
Warmth in your heart a beautiful light elegy.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 24, 2014
Totally love this, Odin, and can so relate. I have many touchy-feely talismen of all my journeyings - both physical and metaphysical. They belong to the mystery of it all for certain sure: feathers, shells, leaves. But candles speak a different language - they talk of time travel as well as the spatial. To me, candles speak of the many journeys we can take during the lifetime of its burning - even whilst sitting within same small circle they constantly light. I'm sure each of your readers will have a different experience of what you bring to us here, each with their own interpretation and box of delights therein. Warming and inspiring, thank you. xx

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 24, 2014
Ahhh . . . Odin, this is very touching. Don't know if I should have said that, you are so withdrawn from this kind of writing, instead you write of all the wrongs of the world. This just delightful to read. Here's to your traveling companion and you.


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