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Pensive Is...

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Nothing is as it starts. There is always a genesis, often without consciousness. (Image by Eugene Soloviev)

Friday, March 14, 2014


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Pensive Is…
by Odin Roark

Pensive is
Where disappointment ponders
While sadness decides

Pensive is
When layered clouds
Crisscross a setting sun
And conch shells
Pull echoes in for the night

Pensive is
A desperate green and red
Neon misfiring
While dollar-a-night patrons
Bury faces in pillows

Pensive is
The shroud of loneliness
Making void the breath
Of happiness

Pensive was
That last sigh
Before despair smothered
Optimism’s trust
Made dark the day
For those without hope

So waits those of nominal experience

    
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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on March 18, 2014
At first this hung in the air of my mind....'Pensive' itself kind of see-through. Then the word "Pensive" grew into the antithesis of 'Hope.' And in the form of 'Hope's' antithesis, it wrapped itself around your introductory sentence: "Nothing is as it starts," which then became an arrow pointing to "Hope." Neat. ~~ Diana
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 15, 2014
"Pensive is as pensive does." Forest Gumption. ;-)

That said, you have clarified pensive to the point where I can cope with it.

Ron
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on March 15, 2014
~Odin~
And conch shells pull echoes in for the night.
The last echo..ultimate breath waiting.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on March 15, 2014
For me, the favoured line has to be...
Pensive is
The shroud of loneliness
Making void the breath
Of happiness

Great expression!
Rx
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 15, 2014
my favorite lines here is "Before despair smothered, Optimism's trust" such a hollow feeling of loss
budd
Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on March 14, 2014
Had to look up "pensive " since I had forgotten what it meant. Now it makes more sense. This just flows, very deep. As always my only profound statement I give when I cannot articulate my thoughts properly is, "Love It ".
Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
Reviewed on March 14, 2014
Stunning work.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 14, 2014
Pensive is . . . Just before a fart.

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