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Aspiration's Burnout

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Those who understand the differences between wants and needs, mere kudos versus inner reward, know well cycles without end or beginnings…time’s nirvana for many. (Image by fiono)

Tuesday, March 18, 2014


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Aspiration’s Burnout
by Odin Roark

Burnout our ever-present nemesis
Affording no exclusion for youth
Luring achievers
Dissing nonstarters

Becoming one’s essence
Knows well jeopardy’s exposure
Like that of any warrior-heart
Striving for excellence
There must be endurance
To confront interminable blocks

But fearless courage
Knows obstacles are fought
With varied weaponry
To clear impassable paths

Often one’s arsenal
Is void of cutting
Penetrating
Or disintegrating barriers

Opting instead
The art of persuasion
Using word and gesture
Honesty’s optimism

Ahead

Always ahead
Rendered breakthroughs
Offer untrammeled mindscapes
Where having navigated life’s razor wire
Devotion’s reward awaits

And we

Eager to soothe passion’s spent energy
Our weary lavatic-like bubbles
Having conquered the pressured depths
Vie for weightless suspension
Wanting some brief respite
Some halcyon comfort
Before defying once again
Aspiration’s burnout

  


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Reviewed by Clarence Prince
Reviewed on March 19, 2014
It seems aspiration will surely has its ups and downs, but knowledge won't cease to function!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 19, 2014
I think everyone's aspirations burnout a time or two in the course of a lifetime. Personally, find that calm persistence leads to breakthroughs into higher aspirations.

Ron

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2014
New words...new (for me) vocabulary words. I like how you keep my dictionary close by. . . untrammeled, halcyon, interminable.

Just a few words can instigate aspiration: "Becoming one's essence," is an inviting phrase.....(can't underline in these text boxes, but 'underline' the word "inviting.") "Honesty's optimism" was a jewel in this poem. ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on March 19, 2014
Even the universe operates in waves, in ebb and flow. Rest awhile. Then rise again, like any good upwelling.

Reviewed on March 19, 2014
Needs and wants are two different things. What we want may not be what we need. Same as what we want for others to achieve may not be what they need in their lives. We often make the mistakes of deciding for others what they "should need" in their lives, but the fact is it may NOT be what they want in their lives. Each of us lead different life, that's what makes us so unique, and we are the ones that knows ourselves best.

Sandie

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 19, 2014
reward, being singed, aspiration..much to think about here
budd

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on March 18, 2014
"Devotion's reward awaits"

If you live that long.

Unless your aspiration is personal achievement, and not spent working for somebody else, the singe is unavoidable.

Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on March 18, 2014
Profound and insightful. Love it !!


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