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Mind Plaque

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The desire for truth is often betrayed by acquiescence and laziness.

Thursday, April 10, 2014


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Mind Plaque
by Odin Roark

In a world of quasi-existential brain tampering
Would that we could floss and brush our minds
Not of innocent often inane wanderings
But of holier-than-though proselytizing
Someone else’s idea of what is right and wrong
True and false

Whether hammered from lecterns
By politicians
Clergy
Media
Or teachers
Our craniums are bombarded
By those who would have us frequent their ideology and service
To chew on and imbibe their version
Of a healthier cycle of habit
Not every six months
But each and every day 24/7

But unlike the dentist
These other practitioners of invasive persuasion
Opt not to X-ray our mouths
But our brains

Such persons are bent on determining
How benign or terminal
Our intake of acquired information
Then counterblast a self-righteous retort
Often preaching their supreme remedy
A moral-implant replacement

So…

When next we hear the sound
You know
That familiar glad hand greeting
Of someone bellowing “their” quintessential solution
Escape to an environment of autonomous inquiry
Where another’s imperative receives no empirical status
Over our need to determine thinking-hygiene for ourselves

After all…

A life of questioning
Has forever trumped
The sureness of someone else’s
Hand-me-down answer

Mind plaque
The buildup of complacency
The decaying of reason



 


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Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2014
I surely smile at Eileen's term 'mental floss.' I also like your term, "invasive persuasion," for it sharply points to the whole idea of 'flossing' away the unhealthy, and invading our 'intake of acquired information,' key word (of yours) being 'acquired,' as opposed to 'discovered.' Lots of mind food in this plaquacious poem. ~~ DIana

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on April 12, 2014
There is so much "Mind Plaque" all around us now, that dodging it all requires strong determination and feats of mental agility.
Rx

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on April 11, 2014
so very true Odin
budd

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on April 10, 2014
We have been trained to exhibit malleable minds towards complacent conformity.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 10, 2014
Most earthians have been spoon fed so much plaque that their brains are already programmed by the time they reach that famous "age of reasoning" and really never get there, locked in the matrix that their parents and teachers have locked them into where they can't break free from their own free will unless some drastic action takes place that removes them and shakes the plaque off their gray matter long enough for them to see the light.

Great insight shown in your rather sidelong look at the problem.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on April 10, 2014
Unfortunately, not one of the plaque slingers will see themselves in your very thoughtful verse.

Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
Reviewed on April 10, 2014
Yep. We all need to take time to use some mental floss. To the list in stanza 2, I'd add parents and friends. People want so much for THEIR ideas to prevail. Nice write.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on April 10, 2014
I completely agree, Odin. We are a nation on the way to becoming third world.


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