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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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5-Star Lonely

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Personification: forever in-sanity’s protection. (Image by cenobite)

Monday, April 28, 2014


Poem Artwork
5-Star Lonely
by Odin Roark

His box-of-a-room,
furnished with imagination.

His one window,
a brick wall view.

His sink,
a crusty faucet for company.

His cupboard-laden-dust,
a spider lair’s entertainment.

His writing table,
endless pages support.

His stubby pencil’s shavings,
time’s puzzle of memories.

His coffee mug,
every morning’s greeting.

His one chair,
all that’s needed.

His faithful bed,
for wide-awake dreams.

His ceiling,
insomniac movies every night.

His personified kingdom,
survival’s safety net.

Some call this life madness.
Lonely knows it’s 5-Star paradise.
 


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Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 29, 2014
Goodness me... I so relate to this and yet here I am, sitting in a comparative palace! The only paradox is that I feel in no way lonely, but privileged... on account of the life in the my mind, rather than the cushion of material comfort by which I'm surrounded. We inhabit just one space, one chair at a time, so what need have we for more? But if we are poor in the chambers of our mind, then we are thoroughly destitute. Your poem is a habited paradise, not a solitary cell, to me... yet I thoroughly appreciate that to some it would seem so. xx

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2014
This poem renders minimalist into a figure to admire. I feel the simplicity to be a banquet with the line: "His one chair,/all that's needed." The protection personification offers sanity = creativity and ultimate companionship. Blissful! ~~ Diana

Reviewed on April 29, 2014
This is perfect and to me very NYC, the insomniac movies are great, if I could rent mine I could retire at a young age for sure! A wonderful read!

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on April 28, 2014
yes it is. also, sounds like heaven. takes me back, and i miss it dearly.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 28, 2014
So many are there. Paying for their high-priced cubicle of isolation in the midst of the busy city that never sleeps. I particularly like the visual ceiling of the sleepless mind. It's a keeper and a ode to loneliness everywhere.

Ron

Reviewed by steve patterson
Reviewed on April 28, 2014
Nice write. Straight. Concise. Stark. I know that lonely. well done.


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