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Lonely's Shadow

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Is not the sense of aloneness but a gift to be unwrapped within, where outside distractions are kept at bay as fear takes the chance to absolve the uninterrupted you? (Image by lintu47)

Thursday, May 22, 2014


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Lonely’s Shadow
by Odin Roark

In the quiet small hours of morning,
In and out of street lamp pools,
Darkness walks hand in hand with lonely.

Bearing no pretense, remorse, or regret,
Its shadow finds desolate park benches,
Sleepy subway platforms
The secluded lover’s pier.

Lonely hears the vacuous sounds,
Those hidden evening scars finding voice,
Echoing down avenues and streets,
Seeking solace,
Identity,
Resolve.

She slips in beside such wanderings,
Knowing her presence is but a symptom,
A cause and effect residual floating aimlessly,
Pain’s essence still back in an empty apartment,
Hotel room,
Or friendless bar.

An exiled stray
Sniffs out this unlikely companionship
Wagging its tail,
Hoping for the words, “I know. I know,”
But accepting the shadowed alliance,
This union of sorts,
Common to man and beast.

The nightly chill begins to wane,
Knowing the respite of an orange sunrise
Will round the turn and take up the baton,
Continuing fear’s chameleon relay,
Where lonely’s shadow
Is but a changing-color away.

   


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Reviewed on May 22, 2014
Sometimes being alone gives one the peaceful re-evaluation of one's life. These alone times are the most helpful moments. Great write, Odin!

Sandie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 22, 2014
"In and out of street lamp pools,"... what a delightfully palpable image this is. I will openly admit that I experience loneliness regularly. Or a kind of desolation or forlornness you could say. But it's not the kind derived from not being loved. It's the kind that comes from gazing regularly into the minds mirror and seeing only how much work has to be done and realizing that no ones going to help. I think it's why I seek out natural beauty as often as I can. Good imagery in this. Enjoyed. rlc

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 22, 2014
The great poet does his greatest work because of his loneliness. To be alone with one's thoughts is the greatest gift a poet has. When one is engaged and not lonely there is no time for poetry or even rational thought.

Ron

Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on May 22, 2014
Love this one. I love my alone time and have a need for it or I'd go crazy. Even though this poem says so much more than someone needing it.


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