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Preparation Unending

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The circuitous route of existence knows more roads than we may ever travel. (Image by ffy857)

Friday, May 30, 2014


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Preparation Unending
by Odin Roark

Oh, how we dream forever eighteen.

Like a ghostly James Dean,
Porsche steering wheel in hand,
Pacific Ocean to the west,
Radio blaring Bernstein's "Age Of Anxiety,"
Life dares mortality to turn its hourglass.

Years pass and life’s romance becomes a faded fantasy,
Archived beside a warrior’s Borneo wildness,
Where drinking jungle blood
And watching stars unseen before
Dazzle a different appetite’s imagination.

Alas...

Duration pulls up at reality’s weigh station,
Where history’s illusory aspiration
The rising,
Reigning,
And controlling enemy within,
Arrives kicking and screaming at the quietus,
Where the inevitable passing of the moment,
Bodes existence assumed dead.

Yet…

Like the rain,
Resolution knows earth’s momentary grounding
Is merely evaporative transience
Becoming a skyward reach
For evolution’s next momentary stop,
The next embrace of cosmic preparation,
That perpetual continuance that is
Was and will continue to be
All of time’s particulates
Forming into tomorrow’s dreams.
 


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Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on May 31, 2014
5-31-2014

Interesting Write As For Person I'm Not
Sure What This Means-I Didn't Even
Know What Porsche Was-Say What!

TRASK...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 31, 2014
I'm not sure what all this means, but it sure is beautiful. Makes me wonder that if nature did not purify it by evaporation and rainfall, clean water would be even more scarce than it already is. As for James Dean, he played tragic figures in his few movies and ended tragically… Small town boy from Indiana becomes legend. I didn't even know what a Porsche was in those days, but I'd heard of James Dean.

Ron

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 31, 2014

nicely done


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 31, 2014
Oh, how we dream forever eighteen.

Oh, how I sometimes now wish that I could be eighteen again.

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on May 30, 2014
i was just taken by your poem, mr. odin. speechless, like the waves of the ocean carrying me.

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2014
This is a different tune, Odin. I like the cadence here, melodic in the wording. So much symbolism, circular, reconstituting. "Arrives kicking and screaming at the quietus" (had to look up quietus and find I really like that word) is a great line. Very fitting that line 6 (....to turn its hourglass) is placed with the teen stage of life, and well to express the perpetual continuance being evaporative transience. This reads well out loud. ~~ Diana


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