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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Sticks

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

When life feels too complicated, reminisce over times when you were but a kid in a simpler grownup world. It does wonders.

Tuesday, July 22, 2014


Poem Artwork
Sticks
by Odin Roark

A stick is a stick,
Unit it isn’t.

Granddad knew.
People still whittled then.
Clasp knives had a purpose
On porches and tree stumps
Wisdom did sit
Piling shavings at their feet

Heads on paws,
Dogs blinked occasionally,
Keeping close watch on creation.

Sticks got shorter,
And shorter,
Then very short.

For many a granddad
Whittling was intense
Sculpturing the day’s purpose
Rendering heavy thoughts ever light
As dogs, children,
Passersby,
Exchanged one’s everyday little thoughts.

And so it was.

There was precision and reason in his focus,
Even as he suffered through a day’s
Crunch
Cram
And grind,
Anticipating the sculptured big stick
Becoming his prideful little stick,
Later.

As late night fireflies danced,
He rocked on the porch,
Explored the meaty stowaways of the day,
And savored the best parts,
Only he and his toothpick could appreciate,
The dog now with raised head.


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on July 28, 2014
Quite the poetic recollection. The watching hound was a good touch! Brush strokes of an accomplished poet! M.True

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on July 23, 2014
Fine job, Odin. Like some sperm whale you've surfaced from the recent depths and given us something of the not-so-distant past, a thing not shallow at all. What next? Stones? Words?

Reviewed on July 22, 2014
People used to take writing more seriously in the olden days, and they lived much happier lives in simplicity.

Sandie


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