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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Weightless

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We sometimes work so hard to create definition when often it requires so little. (Image by Andres Masson)

Thursday, August 28, 2014


Poem Artwork
Weightless
by Odin Roark

How synergistic,
This burden of perceived weight
Nature’s duality of purpose
Some call isolation,
Others deem but connection
To conscious pursuits of fruition.

It’s often rocky paths of change evolving,
Purposely find circuitous routes asking one
Accept disappointment,
Embrace the lessons hard fought,
Avow that even a leaf knows well
There comes a time to give gravity its due,
To peaceably float to a resting place
Knowing behind a once soaring feather follows.

For even though…

Life’s discourse often takes wing
Sometimes gliding into regret,
Nature’s paradox consoles.
Knowing without mistakes,
There are no lessons learned.

Such remains the essence
Of this weightless,
Amorphous wonderment,
Reserved for those
Who while admitting defeat,
Find such disappointment allegorical,
A creation made valid
For all who seek
The inward realm of existential truth.

Weightless…

How beautiful its reality understood.



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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on September 3, 2014
The passage to your poetic persona is steeped in metaphoric figurines, much like the gods of the Tiger Balm Gardens. "How beautiful its reality understood." How perfect its reverence to diversity. M.True

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 30, 2014
Knowing without mistakes,
There are no lessons learned.

How so very true.

Reviewed by Tao Chi
Reviewed on August 29, 2014
Guess that's why I love poetry. The way my brain processes what I read can vary day to day. Figuratively or literally.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 29, 2014
The only true weightlessness is to leave the gravity of Earth, of all gravity sources, behind. But we can achieve weightlessness by falling into that nothingness that we all will reach upon our death. Let's hope that we all go out in a blaze of glory like that magnificent colored leaf falling down in the autumn sky. And that feather from an aging bird soon unable to fly.

Ron

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on August 29, 2014
And do we learn those lessons in time to make any difference? Is that the light(ness) we are told greets us at the end? Both right and wrong of consequence so light as to be nothing at all? Is that the proposition you pose so early in the morning?


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