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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Alone Becoming...Again

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There are some who dread the years ahead, while as writers, time seems to bring as its reward experienced words finally arriving. Often, the repeat of the past is necessary. Then, for still others, a poem or two a day becomes possible because of yesterday’s missteps. (Image by psdbox)

Sunday, August 31, 2014


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Alone Becoming…Again
by Odin Roark

Moments alone in darkness,
Removed from day’s imitation
Invites quiet as comfort.

Closing one’s eyes
Reveals childhood playgrounds
Where companions shared alone,
Telling of secrets,
Once stories filling idle time
While cocooned in tree house intrigue.

Such memories,
Like under-rock-secrets
Found in shadowy woods,
Forever remain as straying-off-trail-discoveries,
One’s finish line for life’s stormy relay,
A cross country run through time,
Finally becoming the dial-face in the sky.

For some…

Time’s aspect bears not a father’s face,
Nor the big and little hands of a mother
Once gently nudging hours along.
Instead, paternal time now relaxes…
Daliesque

All names eventually merge
As a lamina among leaves,
Embraced by the wind
Where remembrance flickers
Like one’s book of candles,
Timeless pages once read by their own burning,
Now
At last,
Finally,
Peacefully,
Blissfully,
Alone becoming… Again



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Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on September 16, 2014
Aging does seem scarey, and being alone isn't much fun - but words like these are simply put and I can relate to many of the stanzas here and the happenings. Good work Odin.

Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on September 3, 2014
Daliesque fer sure! Memories, no matter how vivid and meaningful ultimately melt away. Perhaps to be recalled again at some future point in time, but for better or for worse, some disappear into the abyss of history, never to be seen or heard from again. That's why I always keep a pen and paper handy. You just never know if a recollection might be playing hide and seek, especially just after you turn out the light and settle in to sleep. M.True

Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on September 1, 2014
The words, the experience of others, provide fuel for tomorrow. Few will remember until they find what came before. Personal history refined by words is another. I hope to leave a record of words that could inspire others. Doesn't mean I will succeed I gues. But everythings a chance Odin. Bob

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 1, 2014
Memory provides a endless stream of ideas for poetic expression. You're certainly right about "looking forward" about expressing something new about what happened backward.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 1, 2014
a poem or two a day becomes possible because of yesterday’s missteps.

How so true, so very often.


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