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Surviving the Candle

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A recent 60 Minutes segment chronicled the refugee plight of the Syrian civilians, often walking the deserts to Jordan, Lebanon and Turkish borders, where they add to the more than 3 million taken in. The problem is that most Western countries seem to be apathetic, not offering to take in any of these desperate people There’s something more than wrong with this picture.

Tuesday, December 2, 2014


Poem Artwork
Surviving the Candle
by Odin Roark

Shrapnel or gas,
Blistered skin or severed limbs,
Choice not an option.

Families fear never reaching
Bird songs of spring,
When green leaves announce of new
A season of flowers by chance,
A garden of faith,
A newborn’s wail by arrival.

For many…

A bleak winter,
Short days,
Long nights,
Cloistering the dreaded tomorrows.

For others…

Shouldering few possessions,
The homeless children
And childless parents,
Finding a shelter remains
Their only respite along the way
To refugee camps at Jordanian borders,
Seeming so far in the distance.

Amidst such courage…

Exhaustion hovers ever so near,
A darkness sneaking up on the weakened,
Ready to extinguish the candle of hope
Burned beyond the mind’s tenacious flame,
Now fluttering before eternity’s embrace.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 3, 2014
A poignant poem. The fact is, this isn't the first, or even the last, forced migration of people because of the brutality of war. Africa has probably seen more of this than anywhere else. I don't agree with having these people of similar culture and language "taken in" by other countries. In the past, when the dogs of war are over and the victors have taken their spoils, the civilian population can return and rebuild. I can cite Lebanon as a good example of that. When people end up in far-off countries like the Jewish people did in World War II, they tend to assimilate, making it much harder to go back.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 3, 2014
My heart grieves as well. The whole thing gets mind-numbing. Yes... 'there's something more than wrong with the picture.' - sadly the subtext (if you will) feels malefic but remains elusive. A stage is being set for....

Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on December 2, 2014
So sad a situation, makes me feel sad, but I don't let it bother me to the extent I cannot survive.


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