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Dreamscape Seduction

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The pursuit of success sometimes convinces us to dodge choices, knowing they are causal in nature, creating consequences that become yet further choices. Eventually, some make a decision. (Image by Taylor Marie McCormick)

Friday, June 5, 2015


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Dreamscape Seduction
by Odin Roark

We discovered.

There's a location,
we all know it,
Main Sreet America,
that place where
deals are consummated,
innocents made guilty,
trials court shams.

We learned.

This place of early starts,
schools short of everything;
lined paper scant,
pencils with erasers gone,
full length crayons just history,
once chalk stubs, now nubs,
all while administrators ignore and laugh,
all the way to the bank.

We tried.

That place of the first job,
first date,
first car,
first seduction.

We tested.

Some found the glitter place
where 3-piece suits
came from Brooks Brothers,
not J.C. Penny,
where 2 martini lunches
boded well the norm,
trumping yesteryear's
Big Macs and cokes.

We joined.

Where going home
meant driver-driven,
doorman-opened,
gilded elevator ascension,
home of wrap-around glass,
marble floor supported,
sensory-indulgent décor,
programmed delusions,
where only one’s own voice is heard,
mirrored self-image as only reflection,
all while standing atop terraced view.

We looked out.

We looked skyward.

We looked down.

Seeing thirty-eight floors below,
everyday people,
ones making possible this out-of-touch bubble,
this insulated veneer,
the platinum exterior,
arrested the bad dream.

Some of us woke up...

Finally.



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Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on June 5, 2015
Makes you feel kind of sad for those who don't wake up, those who will never see real life, or experience its values, ever again.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 5, 2015
Yes, it seems that the rules are only the rules for those who do not live thirty-eight floors up or even further. Money. the ability to take huge chunks of money for themselves while, as you mentioned, the everyday people, those who actually do the drudge work making all that possible for the "anointed," a life untold with luxuriousness all the way around. I wonder, Odin, say a member of the everyday people were to get lucky and was able to live up on the thirty-eighth floor, would it change him? Would he reach out to the everyday people he used to call friends and acquaintances or would he smile and congratulate himself on his success and greed, the same greed he abhorred when he was of the everyday people, now consumed him. Humans. We are a strange lot I am convinced.


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