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The Real Selfie

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Why do so many spend so much time striving to know others, while getting to know themselves takes up little time. Something wrong with such a picture?

Wednesday, July 15, 2015


Poem Artwork
The Real Selfie?
by Odin Roark

How stealth its presence
forever concealing surprises.
reasons of compassion or malice?

One’s fear or lack of,
justified or not,
begs explanation
"I suggest a ‘Hi' for starters,
having never been formally introduced.

"You know,
though we gaze at each other over our neighborly fence,
we've kinda brought this on ourselves,
the estrangement, I mean.

"We're like a brotherly reality
meets imagination’s independence,
our very own ‘deer in the headlights' moment kind of thing,
and we just stare at each other speechless and embarrassed.

“Like pigeons fighting over a French fry.
or pall bearers hefting
a flower-laden casket
into a hearse about to
deliver duty-bound to another future passing,
we seem stifled as to what’s next,
what’s for us?

“Idling destroys the moment, ya know?

“It's all so exhausting,
this waiting around for the future,
blind trust promising there’s something better out there,
when all the while, there's so much good air hangin' around,
just dyin' to get sucked up...
right now.

“So...

Here we stand in our house of mirrors.
like I said, 'Hi.'
Probably time we got acquainted, eh?
Care to look? Really look?
Ready to meet the real selfie,
the one you won’t feel compelled to send viral?"
  


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 16, 2015
Yes, so many seem to be hiding behind the anonymity of the Internet, unwilling to meet face-to-face for fear of one thing or another. We stand the chance of understanding one another and that seems to be too dangerous. When I was in foreign countries, I often found in strangers there seemed much more willing to open up and talk one-on-one.

Good stuff. Makes one think.

Ron

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on July 16, 2015

well done



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