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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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The You of Me

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For those of you who have experienced the same dream over and over about family, prodding you to evaluate its meaning, this piece about young sons of the past might resonate. (Image by Parallel)

Sunday, August 2, 2015


Poem Artwork
The You of Me
by Odin Roark

Dreams awaken beneath closed eyelids,
wishing to tell you that which may never find utterance,
for like roads presenting destinations,
time’s passage reduces the once capable surface
to dust clouds making less visible the distant horizon.

Sleep’s images grow restless…

As digital magic bends around rampant obstacles,
and myriad antennae rise,
beckoning unsealed letters to speak gently,
even as the breath of time's memory grows shallow
amidst shifting ebbs of change,
one’s dwindling faith stays afloat,
riding passion’s high and low tides.

Awake…

Reality continues taking its toll,
clashing passion’s rainbow
with painful storms of regret,
leaving behind only remembrances as memento,
while the downpours of yesterday,
slowly flood our once tomorrows.

But…

In my slumber,
time asks I never cease sending
the quiet ripples of my trust
to hopefully quicken the beat of your heart,
beckoning we reposition yesterday's compass
and find a future destination.

And then again…

Perhaps visits will remain as dreams,
for the ethereal knows unspoken love
can still be heard.
We have but to listen,
to allow the inherent echo
that never dies to remain
the you of me,
the me of you.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 3, 2015
Strange, but after reading several poems, I found myself falling asleep and then waking up yours… And then, falling asleep again before the end. That gave me the opportunity to go back and reread what you wrote about our memory operates in sleep. Very introspective and personal.

Ron

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 3, 2015
Love your last stanza.


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