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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

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· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Old Forever Young

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As we age, maintaining curiosity and a desire to learn, is a struggle at times. But to some, its a given. Note: In 2013, Yuichiro Miura, a Japanese 80-year-old became the oldest man to reach the summit of Mount Everest.

Wednesday, August 12, 2015


Poem Artwork
Old Forever Young
by Odin Roark

The young child asks
why?
The adolescent asks
must I?
The adult asks
why not?

Many ask
“Why must it be this way?
Why not skip over the effort?”

Even though at times
there are no teachers,
those promised leaders
of mind,
soul,
and heart--


Innately we know
discovery
is joy,
experiencing disappointment
is but a lesson.
Failure,
but a prelude to success.

For does not the natural mind
pick its nourishment,
ravenous intake of all manner
creating its own reality,
even at times with reluctant submission?

Some would say
the fortunate see through the mongers of power,
beyond swirling seductive sweetness on a stick,
the spin of packaged elixirs of dominion,
always in bright colors unreal,
coming not from rainbows
but from refractions of an oil-slick viral dis-ease.

Would that the magic of youthful curiosity
be reborn from a cocoon of patience
discovering anew life's sugarless candy,
avoiding both the taste of false victory
and the malaise of its inherent decay.

To once again hasten
the ever questioning child
the yesterdays relegated to lesser status,
to now deliver a needed bounty
void of
“I know,”
opting instead for
“I wonder.”

Such is to continue without fear,
to live by not just staying alive,
but being alive.

So say the old forever young.

  


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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on August 13, 2015
Brilliant!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 13, 2015
A lot to chew on and beautifully written. Without adventure life is merely going through the paces, and for some, piling up material wealth and power that goes with it.

I've got to hand it for George H. W. Bush still willing to jump out of airplanes and to smile when he has broken his neck that could have paralyzed or killed him. Driving Cigarette boats at speed can clear one's mind when having to make life-and-death decisions. Poor persons need to have other ways of doing it. Like writing, for instance.

Ron

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on August 13, 2015
~Odin~
Always and forever young.
Beautiful poem.

Lady Mary Ann


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