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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Time's Paper Boat

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I remember this time of year most acutely, a time when my own parents, one after the other, were with such confusion and disappointment in their eyes as they peered out the windows of their rooms. ( Image by ottawalife)

Sunday, November 29, 2015


Poem Artwork
Time’s Paper Boat
by Odin Roark

So often…
like the origami boat of youth,
many find themselves floating about,
seeking streams and rivers leading
to an ocean of completeness,
trusting that more bobbing and weaving
around the currents of resistance,
waves from life’s unexpected currents
will somehow abate.

Some…
staring forth from the windows
of time’s conciliatory nod,
their aging’s quiet moments resonating.
reverberating youthful memories,
(a proud parent’s encouragement to fantasize,
“climb aboard your paper vessel, darlin’…”)
where navigation down the gutter of imagination,
maneuvering around the islands
of discarded soda cans,
unfinished burgers,
an occasional rock or two,
finally coming to rest
atop a drift of grass and leaves ,
still intact,
seems so... wonderful.

Such moments
can still at times,
seem so joyous,
these spawning dreams
of adult adventure assured will come.

Such proud parents, they were.

Yet…

Adulthood never was such a “darlin’” sail,
or successful docking,
or with adoring embraces from all on shore.

How illusive he learned life’s shorelines were,
are,
and continue to be.

Like a landmass on the horizon,
seeming one minute to appear,
then disappearing the next.

So life went,
goes,
endures…

He continues to reside
among so many lost voyagers adrift,
staring out their own portholes,
longing for that which most likely
is still but the tenacity of a paper boat,
cascading toward…

Nevertheless…

Like him,
so many still smile,
especially when their ship seems to be coming in.




    


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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on December 1, 2015
The soil of the writers poetry is consistently fertile, and the efflorescence's of creative-thought intriguing. Peace to you... rlc

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 1, 2015
Life truly is a journey no matter what type of boat we sail on.

Reviewed on November 30, 2015
It's the journey, you have to set sail to destinations unknown. a chartered course is sure disappointment.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 30, 2015
Like I've heard said, "Whatever floats your boat." But in this case, you have brilliantly likened life journey to floating on rivers and oceans to various destinations. And then, finally looking out on the same endless sea every day with only your mind's memory to provide any variety to the landscape. Spot on for the ones relegated to a room with a window by old age!

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 30, 2015
Life ultimately is a singular journey, not knowing where we came from, or where we are going--knowing only that we are on our own. We can ask "are we brave enough to stay the course?" and "are we a bit wiser now than when we started?" The rest is just a memory...

Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on November 30, 2015
Maybe that is what enables people to hang on--believing, even unrealistically that "their ship will come in." As you put it, "tenacity" in the face of unfulfilled dreams and aspirations. Maybe some people just miss their mark by aiming too high.


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