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Sand Castles in the Sky

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To admire success should be to admire achievement, yet success today is more often than not characterized in perfidious ways. (Image by abulena aduri)

Sunday, January 31, 2016


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Sand Castles in the Sky
by Odin Roark

Urban history extols itself.

Street level ambition…

Voracious resonance roils,
private life,
public life,
fever and chills sleeping together,
heaving corrosive air
from colorless lungs,
hearing but their own pleas for ecstasy,
their wails of rapacious cravings.

Rising higher…

Boardrooms and bedrooms
cling to manufactured essence,
obviating affliction’s chronicled past,
flesh bleeding continuum’s plague
irrigating yet more weed gardens
of delusional orchid and rose.

Reaching the top…

Isolation’s darkened windows remain locked,
seductive air of passion’s molt
mixes with the heat of covetous fantasy,
rapidly becoming gluttony's vaporous yesterday
rising through dream clouds
into illusion’s tempest becoming.

While far below…

Wailing sirens rise through the ether,
another of ambition's coronary disruptions
being rushed to death’s way station infirmary
about to be one less emergency burden,
one less victim of fast lane inexperience,
one less covetous plunderer
being saved from child-like disappointment,
unaware that even sand castles in the sky
succumb to ebb’s inevitable tide.

And in the middle…

For the many out of breath,
life becomes but a fools-gold treadmill,
creating unquenchable thirst,
insatiable hunger,
a sickness of virulent infection,
an urban one-percent-contagion
offering nickels and dime employment
to the battling updrafts of street despair,
where sidewalk survivors reaching skyward
bank their meager pocket change,
tearfully.

And even higher…

Secure in their sand castles in the sky,
these takers of all huddle close behind penthouse glass,
securing their panic,
denying the unknown dark,
sipping cognac,
turning up the Bang & Olufsen,
reading each other sonnets they understand little about.

As for reality’s life…

Distant sirens and horns continue through the night.
 


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Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on February 2, 2016
Everything in this life is never free and dues must be paid to get to the top of the ladder but in the long haul is it really worth your Blood, Sweat and Tears...I Think Not! Odin, your words designate us all!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 1, 2016
I really love your breakdown of the rise to sand castles in the sky. Your stanza Reaching the top… Strikes home with me except, fortunately, my isolation can look outside through clear glass even though I can't see very far. And, that strategy will not take me to the top where the sand castles are.

Stunning images of reality in the urban jungle where the Lords swing high in the canopy, isolated from the messy beneath.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on January 31, 2016
I marvel at the volume of original phrases that seem to flow so effortlessly from your creative mind and pen. Who ever heard of "fast lane inexperience?" Not me, but I get it. And which other poet can see corporate big wigs sipping cognac and reading sonnets in their sand castles in the sky? Very original but perfectly said. Another gem.


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