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· A Sticky Conversation

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· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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Alone Together

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Our global society spends a great deal of time in disparate directions, yet beneath it all, we know the deeper rewards can only come from respect (in lieu of agreement) for the differences, regardless of their cultural, ethnic or religious origins. (Image by Ray Mclean)

Saturday, February 27, 2016


Poem Artwork
Alone Together
by Odin Roark

How communal
this loneliness,
this acceptance,
this isolation
of anxious tranquility.

For where might one venture,
find no disturbance,
no coercion,
and expect anticipation’s reward?

Doesn’t solitude know well
the dichotomy of thought,
the imagination of heart,
the privacy of dreams?

And does not therein…

Reside the sense of peace,
knowing that outside influences
have little effect on one’s inner-fortress,
this bastion of resistance,
experience conditioned,
rendering impotent repeated assaults?

And to defend such a state…

Does not one rely
on the integrity of heart and mind,
its armor forged from acquired truth and suffering
to defend nescient invasions
opting to imprison virtue
and obliterate lessons learned?

In battles won,
freedom rejoices quietly
as humanity’s yin and yang,
time’s collective oneness,
enjoins with life’s infinite grace
to once again be...

Alone together.




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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 29, 2016
The paradox of life -- well told, but not solved. And so it is.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 28, 2016
Regardless of our origins, all humans have the capacity, and the need, to find time to be utterly alone with their thoughts. From these times of introspection, some of the greatest ideas ever. These ideas are both divergent and convergent. In my good fortune to have traveled and lived with full in different parts of the world, I have found that everyone, everywhere seems to want these things for their families… Peace, financial security, and the ability to grow and prosper.

Why do we fight with one another so over ideas that often are so skewed that they don't make any sense? Your poem touches gently on these issues so well.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on February 27, 2016
Brilliantly conceived, brilliantly executed. I can say nothing more without spoiling it. John

Reviewed on February 27, 2016
we've used to say 'yin and yang,' meaning dichotomy while there is trichotomy, "as time's collective oneness." If we put it as 'yin--yang,' there is a pause in-between; the time. What's more, time's self-sufficiency is out of men's control by definition; its speeds are so high that yin is yang but yang is yin (without the third 'and' or a pause's compound) "alone together." This seems to be the most difficult point to realize consciously. However, some of us, from time to time, point out at this notion. . . and I should thank you, Odin-san, for sharing this piece of the yin/yang's pattern. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 27, 2016
Indeed solitude knows (and divulges) much. And for me [much] of what is given in solitude remains secreted. Seems more and more, too, as I mature. (-: As long as there is an entrance and an exit and good circulation; the inner-fortress is requisite to endurance (and even survival anymore) in this devolving world. Reiterating the Title in the last line is marvelously effective Odinsan; I use that invention often. Makes the entire statement parenthetical; each poem like a seed (of sorts) to be planted and nurtured. Enjoyed your thoughts here. Well done. Enjoy your weekend. r


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