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· ECHOSIS

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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99% Reality

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Amidst all the defensive platitudes and posturing by politicians, there are many hidden truths of reality seldom witnessed as history continues to repeat itself. (Image by Dorothea Lange)

Thursday, March 10, 2016


Poem Artwork
99% Reality
by Odin Roark

Quiet motoring ascends.

Chauffeured remembrances abound.

From conscious plans
resultant essence remains unconscious.

Once of graveled driveway,
now adorned by heated concrete,
the tinted dark windows motor past,
isolating more inequality tending vast surroundings.

Where once scrub oak ran wild,
cypress trees line extravagant entre,
embracing switchbacks to the fortress façade
now but another Wall Street property
another clandestine manipulation turned gold.

Hesitant eyes turn from smoked glass
to manicured hands folding a silk hem over exposed flesh
as if couturiere pampering could insulate the guilt
while passing guiltless willingness to serve.

Bent backs of gardeners
beneath threadbare cotton cover
straighten to smile their faces of pain,
to nod what's expected,
to nod with requited obedience,
to nod for survival.

The Bentley proceeds,
its hubris aglow with
gold flecked adornment,
chrome in trumpeting announcement
obviating any modesty of gluttonous image.

Arched as half coliseum,
ancient ruin sans crumbling stone,
a granite storied estate looms ahead,
its historic facade hovering over the stop,
the exit,
the entrance to…

Alcove of marble,
checkered with live chess pieces awaiting,
maid and butler,
servant this,
and servant that,
compliant daily fates.

Ignoring the ceremony,
the she of he ascends the grand staircase.
The he of she gazes after,
exuding the intimate question never answered.

Retiring to his quasi-safe room,
he closes the doors,
latches tight,
stands a moment,
slides down,
back to wall,
wall to floor,
slumped respite eyeing
walled library of
color coordinated spines,
all the classics,
all the must reads,
all unopened,
all merely more of the...

Outside, a little girl picks a flowered weed,
hands it to her hunched-back mother.

The spade is laid aside.

Mother and child

A smile.

A touch.

A 99 percent reality,
talked of by many,
seen by oh so few.
 


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Reviewed on March 11, 2016
this is what I call 'reality of contemplation,' the state once entering which you see with your ears and hear with your hair-covering. Yes, details, details and some more details up to the bed of the stream you have precisely determined as 'the 99 percent reality' in which only one percent (statistically) is white in colour. . . Cheers, alex

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 11, 2016
Regal opulence always finds its way into the hands of the callous and the uncaring, while mocking the saintly hands of those it exploits.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 11, 2016
Strong imagery, moving perceptions, focused, intense, spot-on language, another journey through the inequalities that life (and humankind) have to offer. Nicely done. John

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 11, 2016
a very well done write, if I remember correctly the image was of an Okie during the dust bowl migration to California?


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