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Jigsaw Perfection

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Infatuation, be it for another person, or body of people, or a community of smiling faces, there remains the task of proving the truth in this, the beginning of what might become love. (Image by Pixabay)

Monday, August 15, 2016


Poem Artwork
Jigsaw Perfection
by Odin Roark

How weary grows the heart,
fatiguing the mind,
tiring the loins of anticipation,
all for the finding of the perfect fit,
the ideal inlay of two persons
the curvature and perfection
of love’s yin and yang.

Yet…

So many veer from the puzzles path,
distracted by simpler challenges,
the placing of oneself in easy attainment,
avoiding the discovery of the difficult pieces.

How easy it seems to seek out but two components fitting together,
bothered not by the grayness surrounding them,
the risk of love’s jigsaw challenge,
the effort to find the surrounding elements
that truly allow an integral commitment’s success.


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Reviewed by Charles Neff
Reviewed on August 21, 2016
I like the juxtaposition of randomness and order in the jigsaw image and that you combine poetry with your interest in other art forms. For me, it's poetry and music. But my overall image is slightly different. You pour out jigsaw pieces from a box and can, presumably, put them back in the same box. Not so in contemporary jazz. The box changes right alongside the attempt to fit a (musical) puzzle together. So a puzzle remains, but, for me, putting it together can never result in perfection. Rather I seek an an enhanced ability to put anything together adequately so that it holds together long enough to land again;
Obviously your poem intrigued and informed me.
Charlie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 16, 2016
I read compatibility… Generally between a male and female. Something that seems to be getting harder with all the distractions that life throws at us. My younger brother just tied the knot again for a third time this past weekend. At least he keeps on trying. Maybe this time the puzzle will fit and it will be permanent, at least for the rest of their lives.

Ron

Reviewed on August 16, 2016
for me, the true grayness which surrounds two opposing parties is when a swordsman just waves with his steel in the air but his opponent, upon coming back home, falls apart into several pieces. . . An interesting point which hides somewhere on the curved border between the yin and yang. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on August 16, 2016
Being there, doing that! A whole new world lies beneath the one we thought we lived.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 15, 2016
We seem to be on the same wave-length. First, you write about mistakes as I have done recently to similar effect; now you mention "the perfect fit", echoing my other recent (unposted) poem "The Wrong Fit". As you suggest in your poem, we need to stop "avoiding the discovery of the difficult pieces". Your poem has great insight. John


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