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Dunes Adrift

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Regarding the precarious future, youth of our country, as well as the middle class, have much to be concerned about. Back 4 years ago, a NYT op-ed by Brooks did shed much needed light on the subject. Unfortunately, little has changed. http://www.nytimes.com/2012/01/31/opinion/brooks-the-great-divorce.html?_r=1&hp

Saturday, September 24, 2016


Poem Artwork
Dunes Adrift
by Odin Roark

Across the rooftops
dotting Manhattan's skyline,
where once TV antennas reined supreme,
opulent landscaping
asserts oasis dominance
providing much for the few,
mere fantasy for the many,

High up…

Penthouse gardens
indulge mortgage sized upkeep.
their hidden water towers irrigating lavish trees,
plants, lap pools, fountains, and Jacuzzis

While below…

Around the corner
fire hydrants spray waterfall dreams
upon children's bare feet,
as stray canines
bark with summer relief
amidst the little one’s stolen laughter.

Adults occasionaly glance skyward…

Windowed reflections revealing
high-rise awe undulating ever upward,
reaching rooftops where a new century of gilded pardon
pampers power,
vertical by design,
horizontal by aliennation.

For so long…

Storms of greed
have continued leaving behind
windfalls’ aftermath,
arid living erosion
forcing hordes of the innocent
to endure experiencing
trickle down anything,
holding forth survival's canteen of tolerance
down to its final drops.

Increasingly…

Dry throats of need,
reduced to whispers,
their outcries having once bellowed
through canyons of steel and glass,
now but dissolve into hushed reserve,
no longer able to plead for opportunity and justice.

Burnt throats of suffocation
eventually utter but gasps of silence,
their suffering ignored
leaving the disenfranchised exhausted.

Angry minions hesitantly peer upward,
see only the surreal tower-clock of Babel,
two black hands closing,
soon to converge,
one upon the other,
hastening finality,
where for many
twelve midnight will remain the frozen demise.

All the while…

Leaning over gilded rails from many stories high,
impoverished souls peer upon the streets below,
perky girls grinning in fashionable high heels
accompanying junior execs in Armani attire
atop their vertical kingdom,
having become the privileged
where the light headed have-alls,
never feeling the weight
have-nots must shoulder.

For so many…

Leaden feet sink further
into misery's quick sand,
an ever scorched landscape of despair
where once the thirst for living
labored only to last through
the next parched breath.

In the surrounding neighborhoods
expectation continues romping
in fire hydrant showers.

Hope remains patient…

Imaginings flourish,
not yet aware
that like their parents,
everyone's dreams
eventuate into realities un-wanted,
where sanctuary for the moment
remains a shelter, any shelter
to protect their sanity from
the endless dust storm
once again burying them
in drifting dunes.


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Reviewed by Michael True
Reviewed on September 27, 2016
Another fine poem from the master of the city-scape sound stage.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on September 25, 2016
The only uplifting part of your message is the superb manner in which you piece together the words that tell us of the remnants of society, in which the great majority are beaten and battered into swirling masses of disenfranchised cling ons, yearning for a day that has no chance of ever returning—save only for an unforeseen catastrophe that can bring it all down, or raise us all up.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 25, 2016
Sometimes it's good to think of Manhattan before Central Park was built for the masses. That melting pot of immigration that has always been meat marketed to the gilded since the English took over from the Dutch. So many lives ground up and wasted so that the rich could get richer and put their names on edifices too massive to fail.

As your poem so richly describes, the microcosm that is NYC reflects the world in a nutshell. Does gold plating our environment and dabbling in green architecture benefit us all? I doubt it.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 24, 2016
A New York City landscape that I am most familiar with. You paint a picture as if I were really there. Sometimes, I wish I were, out here in the real "shifting dunes". John


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