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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Preference Manifest

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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Dreamt Awakenings

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This work continues to be prompted by that elusive time between a dream's end and the awakening into reality. (Image by Pinterest)

Monday, November 14, 2016


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Dreamt Awakenings
by Odin Roark

Words without color
are words drawn from an empty well,
from fathoms of dusty knowledge that fade
as time encroaches time.

And sounds without song
are but shards of empty utterances,
where once melody passed from quill to paper,
from page to book, from heart to soul
but are now mere ellipses to…

He needs her to touch his heart
to envelop their being with shadow's light
and paint choruses of joy atop a palette of love.

He has forged the arc of their journey
wherein awaits the mystery,
that patience bestows on time,
that willingness that allows for hope,
the courage delivered with passion.

“Be my Shadowlight” he asks.
Dance with me in the whiteness of infinite rainbows
even as many answers linger in shadows.

With patience granting little,
today, he began a walk through unknowns,
through questions without answers,
through memories not yet born,
through answers to be earned.

Tonight he continues his walk through tomorrow,
where mind and spirit protect each other in anticipation's darkness,
where sleeping sunsets not yet seen prepare their colors of peace and quiet,
where sunrise waits to dawn its light of anticipation.

Tomorrow he will take a walk back through tonight,
remembering the wind that carried the sweet fragrance of her smile,
the touch of translucent thought and feeling upon his lips,
the shadowlight that protected him from yesterday
remaining for his many tomorrows.
 


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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 15, 2016
Ah yes... '(Eyes still closed, the vagueness of reality sharpens
with the aroma of brewing coffee and the laundry hamper)
information runnels flowing as auditory influences
pepper temporal dimensions associated
in spatial dispersion.'
This poem of yours could be a variation of my own poem Third Eye Rill. Well constructed and received. Your heart diamonds are glimmering. r

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
Reviewed on November 15, 2016
That certainly is a wish washy short period of time but yet we are between two worlds. Beautifully written.

“Be my Shadowlight” he asks.
Dance with me in the whiteness of infinite rainbows
even as many answers linger in shadows."

Lovely!

Love ya!

Jane



Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 15, 2016
It is almost nightmarish the way you write of your dream experiences rambling from past to future and beyond.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 14, 2016
This is originality at its best. Traversing the twilight between two realities with words that carry the weight of song and color and imagination, and done with such a delicate touch and an appreciation for the sensibility of the reader while being true to the artist that is within. I am left stunned and awakened.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 14, 2016
Love the title, it speaks volumes even before reading the poem.

Love the lines (among others):
"With patience granting little,
Today, he began a walk through unknowns."

Sounds like a summary of my life.

John


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