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The Little Wave That Could (rewrite)

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After spending much time on the Oregon coast, I’m reminded often of how easy it is to ignore our planet’s largest life-giving force.

Sunday, November 20, 2016


Poem Artwork
The Little Wave That Could
by Odin Roark

So small
amid my big brothers,
surfing atop their shoulders,
cresting death with infant life.

So many miles
riding the shoulders of whitecaps,
their splash my recreation,
like the hydrant joys
that cool young spirits on land
while chameleon waters bide their time.

Shamans of the deep
have tutored my future,
preparing me for the day
when I will be lifted into free fall
descending and roiling into big brotherdom
for others like I once was,
floating with the spray,
awaiting their turn
to tease the shoreline,
but always returning to the voyage.

I too can return .
So many ways back to the ocean,
through the reflux of the ebbs,
the rise and fall of tides,
evaporation to the clouds
for the respite needed before…

I return to my purpose for existing.
I can still hear Davey telling me over and over;
“You’re the molecule of life’s continuing story
with no end in sight, save the long term effect
of global warming."

Sad to think that could happen…
the loss of so many minuscule friends populating the deep,
waiting their turn to be the little wave that could. 


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Reviewed on November 21, 2016
see, how good it is to be a small and think about something great; this is the Grand Way. Conversely, it is so painful to come back to the lower region and take a sober view from your former position, again. A truly suggestive writing. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 21, 2016
From the perspective of an individual, the sea and sky seem endless. And from the beginning of time, have been our dumping ground as though, "dilution is the solution." But like your poem suggests, little waves can grow into big waves and cause much disruption. If we lose the small creatures of the oceans, we will lose the planet. It's that serious, and you know it and show it with your poetry.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 20, 2016
Love the title. We are all in a sense "little waves that could", just by being who we are meant to be and are. Charming poem. John

Reviewed on November 20, 2016
I love this poem/story!!! The next time I am at the beach and I see the wave that is huge and crashing, I shall applaud and cheer for it may have been the "little wave" that made it to the big time!

Love ya!

Jane


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