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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Anonymity Requited

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For poets, the state of anonymity is normal. Most poetry is read by a limited number. Yet, the poet’s work, his reflections, his personal convictions are revealed each time he uses the web to connect with whomever wishes to read his/her work…which often is his/her life. (image by Chagall)

Sunday, March 12, 2017


Poem Artwork
Anonymity Requited
by Odin Roark

Seen by many,
told by few.

The stark face of a bus rider.
A hungry, rag-tag boy’s face pressed up against a pizzeria window.
A marathon runner unable to lift himself from the ground at the finish.
On the hospital grounds, a sorrowful mother watches her cancer-suffering son try on various hats,
each bringing a “Do you like it?” from the boy.

Perhaps it’s the way a leaf floats from its seasonal shedding.
or the way the bedded gold, red and orange welcomes it.

The cat peering from its windowsill longing for sidewalk and alley freedom.
The goldfish wondering why it has no freedom.
The fall sky with its grayness of winter preparation,
allowing a crisp breeze to carry its first raindrop,
not quite ready to be a snowflake yet.

Finally, after his daily city walk…

The young poet enters the park and sits down next to a homeless woman feeding imaginary pigeons.

His notebook and pencil poised for that first word written, he renders his eyes closed,
the tears longing to be relieved.
 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 13, 2017
Revealing the poet. As you state so clearly, there are many reasons for the poet to write. And many poets and their poetry go unrequited like a lover who goes unnoticed into the void.

But occasionally there are poets like Plato, Shakespeare or Dylan who touch the core of the existence and change society. Whether poetry describe the absurd like the existentialist or the inhumanity, like your young poet on a park bench, all are valid and some are great and life-changing.

Ron

Reviewed on March 13, 2017
The poet holds back his tears...........ahhhh!!! He sees who and what yearns to be free from barriers in the mind and in living. So touchingly written!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Mystic Rose
Reviewed on March 13, 2017
You are amazing, no other way to express how I'm touched by your words, have a great day, keep intriguing me, some more. xo

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 12, 2017
In the end, the fine art of writing poetry is a great mystery explored every time a person write a poem. Once on the page, it is a gift to the world. John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on March 12, 2017
Creative to capture the sad reality which we see on a daily basis, but never allow them entrance into our core. The writer of this poem bared his core for all to see within the lines of this very personal poetical writing, Thank you.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 12, 2017
If a poet or anyone else wants me to understand his/her guiding principles (perspective, world view, ideology, beliefs, moral compass), and how he has struggled to formulate them, it is far easier for him to tell me what they are rather than to wait until I have read his entire contributions to mankind and then make a judgment about them which I am not inclined to do. Besides, perspectives change as does another's capacity to assimilate them. And they are probably never assimilated as the author wishes. With any luck the feeble art of communication is malleable enough to round off the rough edges and allow us to avoid killing each other over a misunderstanding about a point of philosophical differences that neither of us can define very well. Maybe not.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on March 12, 2017
It doesn't matter what we write. Whether we bare our souls, or just have fun with words. What we write is a piece of ourselves that comes from the heart, and when it's all said and done, we only want what we write, to be read.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 12, 2017
Each of us glean and blossom in our own way. Some share everything they write. Some share only a small percentage of it. Retaining a youthful artlessness in how one explicates their work can be beneficial (for a season or a lifetime). Others just need an outlet to purge the cynical rancor, and demons, they've collected (for a season or a lifetime). Being faceless (IMO) is better for the 2nd approach. I've done both. And as far as I'm concerned both are equally valid but not equally digestible to the reader. For the last several years the 'art of poetry', for me, far outweighs any other impetus. Sharing the way we do (in two dimensions) can be a blessing and a curse. All the best... r

Reviewed on March 12, 2017
rendering his eyes closed, the young poet can see much clearer what's going on around, like that cat peering from its windowsill without moving back and forth. Besides, anonymity is guaranteed. But the young poet does not know that yet. Cheers, alex


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