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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Updraft

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

With so many ways to deal with the end,
perhaps it a saving grace to imagine tenacity beyond the obvious. (Image by pinterest)

Tuesday, May 2, 2017


Poem Artwork
Updraft
by Odin Roark


He sees the journey endless,
yet knows well there will be an ending.

He senses the other side of his heart,
that way station of life
where respite follows getting beyond
yesterday’s surprising betrayal of beauty and pleasure.

Perplexed with what to do,
he rejects conceding to finality,
believing there’s more.

After all…

Who will hear the melodies like him,
one’s metronomic pulse rising and falling,
hear rainbow vibrations
atop a sparrow’s whistling breeze,
smell the freedom of flowers
opening with dawn’s fraternal light,
or taste longevity’s savory consciousness,
touch the anxious brush-strokes of dreams
still seeking canvas?

Restless…

Aware the final movement
of life’s symphony inexorable,
his spirit soars above the clouds
not yet willing to embrace
death’s air of finality

Patience smiles.

How fortunate.

Another updraft greets him.


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Reviewed on May 4, 2017
I actually "felt" the updraft. Great imagery!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 4, 2017
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! VERY TALENTED!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! ...'smell the freedom of flowers'..... EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 3, 2017
I can see someone struggling with the finality of the coming of the end of life. Wanting to believe that there is something beyond to savor from the experience of this life, but sensing that perhaps it is not there.

At one of those eternal questions as yet unanswered.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on May 3, 2017
This is a stunning a description of life filtered through masterful strokes of originality. What a pleasure to read!

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on May 2, 2017
Death comes in its own time apparently. Some wonder language and images here in this poem of hope. John


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