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To Be Not Trusted

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Whether in personal relationships, business, or politics, to remain one who is trusted in a rapidly eroding pride of principal, competes with the arguable permissive dishonesty as acceptable by far too many, except perhaps the young. (Image by Meizlo)

Thursday, May 4, 2017


Poem Artwork
To Be Not Trusted
by Odin Roark

Especially in youth…

To be not trusted
is to see all light as darkness,
all darkness as silence,
aliveness sleeping forever never.

To be not trusted
hurls one beneath the covers of death
where tomorrow’s future can be but dreamed,
never to realize yesterday’s seedlings for tomorrow,
that simple desire to be of petals,
not a tumbling weed among stunted blossoms.

To be not trusted
is to be banished adrift from the path
without compass or stars,
rendering breath but in a vacuum,
gentle touches as whispered memory,
fragrance becoming the surviving flower
desperate to bloom,
but imprisoned by life’s wanton mirage.   


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Reviewed on May 8, 2017
"To not be trusted" happens for a reason in one way or another at any time in life in trillion different situations.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 5, 2017
Michael and John make good points I believe you are eluding to. But I took your poem personally. There is a certain stigma to having your appearance be "crippled." Many times in my life with teachers and superiors, trust was not immediately given and had to be earned. Finally, when I did attain some level of success, others for one reason or another would not trust me even though I remained open and consistent in my dealing with them. So many just could not trust me (in my condition) to be responsible, able or even correct.

It is telling that one of the most cultivated practices these days is to read and practice the teachings of Machiavelli.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on May 5, 2017
And with our current POTUS, we are living in a world of lies, deceit and alternative facts. Will truth and honesty prevail once more?

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on May 4, 2017
Trust indeed is a precious thing. You have touched upon an interesting idea of what it means "to be not trusted", which is of a timely nature as nowadays there is very little trust left in the world. John


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