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Time Looking Around

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Can we afford to only look at today and ahead? (Image by Mysalim)

Wednesday, August 23, 2017


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Time Looking Around

When duration looks around,
ancient, yet so new, is the thrust of the caveman's spear,
the flood of his primal wail
echoing through the memory of a conscious mind.

Yet…

There are those who walk with false pride as modern man,
losing daily the value of remembrances where much wisdom resides,
blinded by meager entitlement-present and future.

Are we slaves to delusion,
convinced there must be more than the past?

We who might never again appreciate yesterday's history,
for the language on the rocks,
walls,
parchment paper,
video screens,
holograms,
are but now.

How quickly the chronology of experience moves.

Why does progress sometimes choose to forget?

Are we but contemporary cavemen
buried deep inside our own vanity?

The invention of time is always looking around
to recruit those who are slaves to brief passage.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 24, 2017
There are among us those that don't seem to know the lessons of history. Many gather up the latest technology and claim to be experts without the foundation that got them to this place of convenience without purpose.

I'm reminded of Naked and Afraid, the TV reality show that pits naked people against wilderness landscapes where they learn that their biggest enemies are heat and cold as well as the little things--insects. Without the proper implements, they sharpen a long branch and create a spear. But then they soon learn, that without a primitive man's skill they can't spear a fish or kill a wild animal of any size because of their ineptness in knowledge about how the spear works.

Ron

Reviewed by Susanne Leist
Reviewed on August 24, 2017
I like the Daliesaque picture. Time passes, and we should be aware of it--the past and the present. Those who refuse to look back are doomed to make the same mistakes over and over again.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 23, 2017
Your question about being "contemporary cavemen" is most telling and really sums up the poem in the unanswered questions. A resounding YES. John

Reviewed on August 23, 2017
We see it all happening right now. You topped the charts with this one!

Love ya!

Jane


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