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Yesterday's Rocker Spirit

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Certain reforms, like immigration, are so fundamental to the democratic philosophy that to stonewall the necessary change does indeed seem unforgivable, and most definitely, unpatriotic, given our country’s ancestry.

Tuesday, November 7, 2017


Poem Artwork
Yesterday’s Rocker Spirit

Hotel Nugget,
Now but a cat and mouse residency,
Ghost town memories catching still-night breezes
As hypnotic rocking begins its ritual.
Bramble bush audience tranquil in the streets,
Where snake and scorpion dance.

An owl atop the saloon’s tin roof blinks,
And like a surreal opera chorus,
Stairways creak,
Brothel’s shredded curtains flap,
Left-behind jail-keys jingle timidly,
Windmill squeaks its hunger for oil,
All becoming a melodious accompaniment,
Knowing well the faithful and sometimes cranky hotel proprietor,
Ghostly Sadie Dershowitz,
Nugget’s self-appointed diva,
Its one of a kind anomaly,
Especially back in 1853 Goldy Town,
Will continue to hover in and out of a simplicity that once was.

WELCOME!

Need a room?
Need a girl?
Need some shoeing?
Need me?

C’mon…

Somebody must need me,
Laments the lonely immigrant spirit,
Chanting tributes to her past settler friends,
Whispering her secret sadness for today’s freedom dreamers:
Syrian refugees,
Sudanese,
Somalians,
Libyans, et al,
Needing little of a boom town’s riches,
Wanting only the liberty to be.

Sadie died in her rocker,
A casualty of her time,
But unlike today…

Illegal aliens on foot,
Willing by any means
To earn their stay,
Face much more than dusty roads, tumbleweed, and a chair to sit in.

So many American towns and cities with shuttered windows,
Dead-bolted doors,
Guns at the ready,
Hold steadfast their fear of migration.

So much fear.

So little rocker spirit.


    


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Reviewed on November 9, 2017
Your imagery "takes me there" and I imagine the smell of Sadie's place, the noise, the smoke............so much more. I hear a honky-tonk piano in the background.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 8, 2017
It seems that ghost towns are not just about ghosts, but so much more. Thanks for this.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 8, 2017
I thought you were writing about Mick Jagger, Paul McCartney and John Fogarty!

But this old Western tale is about immigration. Cool. Yes, most of those historic heroes had deep roots in another country that they fled from for one reason or another. We tend to forget that in our closed mindedness about our heritage going back to the rich, slaveholding, founding fathers and their right to keep control of their vast holdings with guns and hired guns, we are showing our ignorance.

I think those windows are shuttered and not shuddered. ;-)

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 8, 2017
I so agree with that which you have penned here. I too have visited many a ghost town in the west in years long gone by, and heard the music of which you write and see the missed opportunities of those of today


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