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Thanksgiving Love Prayer Revisited

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That Thanksgiving remains an American, primarily Protestant, tradition begs the question: is this event supposed to celebrate what we did to the Native Americans after they taught settlers how to plant corn and fertilize crops, or how we successfully continue to delude ourselves into believing we’re the chosen and “exceptional” people?

Wednesday, November 22, 2017


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Thanksgiving Love Prayer Revisited

Isn’t easy to understand another’s need
Where tradition’s expectations
Have obviously failed your desire for gratification,
Rendering little relief to the discomfort of
Cracks in your otherwise perfect foundation…
You know,
The inflexible treatise you’ve been taught,
“the way it should be.”

Yes.

Some of us are separate from everyday definition,
Perhaps not by choice,
But by instinctual need,
Where outside persuasion is a weak option,
When need trumps pressure,
And “have to” will not be blinded by “this way.”

You’re not expected to comprehend,
But to accept truthful behavior,
Tolerance that makes connections that last
Versus those of short term stroking of one’s ego.

Yet …

How quick some are
To deny honesty,
As if such convictions were foreign
To the lexicon of natural expression,
Perpetuating man’s survival of the species.

Perhaps from such rejection of reality,
The next world war will emanate
Where faiths of obstinacy will finally
Make intolerance a battle cry
Armed with weapons we’ve not even
Invented yet.

So…

What might a Thanksgiving be like,
Void of prayer over a roasted turkey,
And instead a collective resolve
Spoken to the global heart,
Asking tolerance to become the key element for connection,
Proclaiming respect of another’s belief to allow peace.
That acknowledging “My way or the highway”
Is just another way of inviting
The inevitable retort…
A bugle blast that says, “Charge.”

What does Love say?

Amen



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Reviewed on November 24, 2017
'Love this! It IS WHAT IT IS!! Why can't some people just accept the truth? This makes me crazy!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 23, 2017
You raise the questions about why we accept traditions and then carry them out in strange ways rather than the simple beginning that the holiday, Thanksgiving stood for for early settlers. Somewhere along the way, reasonableness was thrown aside in the tradition became something other than before, like "football watching day."

You also alluded to how those alone and intellectually inclined, who might not even celebrate with others at all, but make use of the time to do something really worthwhile with their lives.

Ron

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on November 23, 2017
Just one of the numerous shames we forget when we start bragging about 'our greatness' - love says - well done, as always, Odin.

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 23, 2017
I have also visited this subject with similar feelings.
It is the Manifest Destiny for the white Europeans to occupy all the land from sea to shining sea. After we take it from the Natives, subjugate the Blacks, disenfranchise the Mexicans, mistreat the Japanese, and demonize the Muslims.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on November 22, 2017
well said my friend, I celebrate the meaning of the thought to me. with family and friends, those and those things I am most thankful for

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on November 22, 2017
Well said, and well written.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 22, 2017
Notwithstanding the 'New World Order' undertones in this ("collective resolve, global heart"); 'We' are Human Beings and humanity, since the beginning, (in every culture and religion) makes traditions. The way I see it the most important traditions do not preserve the ashes of our mistakes and short-comings, they pass on the flame. All the very best to you.... r


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