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Weightless

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Why do we work so hard to create definition for everything, when some things require none?

Sunday, December 10, 2017


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Weightless


How defiant this burden of weight
Some call isolation,
Others deem impatience,
That sometimes slow healing of blindness.

But…
 
To walk upon paths of Nature’s unexpected,
That sometimes circuitous route
Asking we accept disappointment,
Is but an invitation to embrace hard fought lessons.

For doesn’t much of life’s regret accompany insight,
Leaving us conscious that without mistakes,
Fewer teachings will be learned?
 
As for the heart…

Avoiding burden's weight is hard fought,
Genuinely earned when resistance wanes
And the essence of such rapture is accepted
As not a possession.
 
Love is a weightless,
Amorphous wonderment,
Reserved for those
Who readily accept disappointment,
Yet know passion’s reward persists in validating
Those who allow passion’s sublime complexity,
To remain a mystery.
 
The unbounded weightlessness of such an enigma...

How beautiful its reality.
 


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Reviewed on December 14, 2017
Oh, to those who have, and I have, experienced passion that has us floating on air, "Weightless"!! 'Enjoyed!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 11, 2017
I certainly do float through the air in my own mind without ever touching the ground. Thoughts are truly weightless.

Ron

Reviewed on December 11, 2017
once I've communicated with people from a Chinese circus who exercise light or weightless qi-gong (gong-fu) standing on eggs. Is it complicated to practice, I always wonder. When you're inside, nothing is complicated, they say. Yes, amorphous love is inside while passion is outside; a routine is inside while a mystery is outside. . . so, practice hard to make your life weightless. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on December 10, 2017
You raise some interesting thoughts; the mystery of weightlessness lies in its transparency or perhaps invisibility, as you suggest at the end of the poem, to see a beautiful reality in the "weightlessness of an enigma."


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